All my thoughts now staying at bay
I have no words now to say
All my hardwork no more pay
My hopeful mind seemed so away
Sleepless nights I now spent
My words always trying to defend
All my dreams now seem hopeless
A hope of tomorrow I hold nevertheless
People changing I change with them
Dreams flooding my heart a gem
All strikes brimming with colours like emblem
My mind still wander without a place to condemn
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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Wonderful piece! Truly enjoyed .💕
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I am so happy you enjoyed! Your words really mean a lot to me. Thank you so much!!❤
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Always a pleasure.💕
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❤
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The way you express these emotions and feelings in a poetic manner is just so relatable and heart touching! Keep writing! ♥️
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Your comment gave me so much happiness. Thank you so much Rabhya!❤
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Your welcome dear ❤️
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Great
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I am so glad you think so. Thank you so much!!
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The pleasure is mine.
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wonderful piece!
the picture is so nicee!! how do you create such pictures?
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Thank you so much! There are many apps that help me to create graphics! Thanks again.
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yours welcome!!
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Eloquently written ❣
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Thank you so much!!
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Wow loved this!! 😍
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much maggie!💕
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You’re very welcome! 💛
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A beautiful poem, with perfect flow and rhyming👌👌
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I am so glad you think so!!😊
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Another great work!. .very very beautifully penned Jan.
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That is so sweet to say. Thank you so much Aayushi!
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You are always welcome dear!
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This resonates.
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I am so happy it resonates. Thank you so much for reading!!
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Very welcome.
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Wow, flows smooth like butter. Lovely, my friend!
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Thank you so much dear Sam!!😄
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Let’s hope that dreams will keep flooding!
THANKS for sharing this lovely poem!
I’m Claudia, nice to meet you!
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment. You are most welcome. Nice to meet you too claudia.
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Wowww..! I loved this poem very much dear..! This is a masterpiece..! You are always creating a masterpiece..! I’m always love to see them..! Keep shinning dear..!💕💕
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Aww I am so glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!
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You’re very welcome dear..!💕💕
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Wonderful!
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Thank you Pannaga!!!!!!
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My mind still wander without a place to condemn
Loved this line. ❤️
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I am so happy you loved it! Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!❤😊
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