
My heart has a hole
Now making me whole
It is the one you stole
At that time my life was a pole
Iron is darker than coal
My life seem like a doll
The thunder is taking its toll
But I am moving so tall
You call me a thief
As if it will give me any grief
You say things so brief
But it only make my belief
A loner at the sea
Somewhere my eyes can’t see
To the haters looking to me
I don’t believe whatever you say you see
Move forward faster than a blink
Give no time for the haters to think
Their words will fade faster than a wink
Then they will look at you and blink!
– Jan @jahnavigouri

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Thanks!
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To the haters looking to me
I donβt believe whatever you say you see
Saving this post, the best thing to read while facing adversities and hatred. Thank you for penning this, Jan. ππ€
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Thank you so much. I am so happy to hear that.π It really means a lot to me. Thanks once again!!π
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Thank you so much. I am so happy to hear that.π Wow! You are most welcome!
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wisely penned my dear.
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!π
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no need my dear
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Powerful piece, great message Truly enjoyed.π
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I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed. Thank you so much!!π
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My pleasureπ
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Very trueπβ€
Nice poemβ¨
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I am happy to hear that. Thanks a lot!!β€
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You’re verry welcomeπ€π
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Very cute and refreshing poem! Somehow it Brings me back to the wonderful sense of childlike naΓ―vetΓ© π€
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Thank you so much for your lovely and kind words!!π
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Great poem! Loved the rhyme scheme β€
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Thank you so much Cherelle! I am so glad you think so.π
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Beautiful lines with a nice rhythmπβ€
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Thank you so much!!β€
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My pleasure ππΉ
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Great poem, Janπ
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much May!!
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Beautiful poem and so nice to read the lines also ππ·πBest wishes β₯οΈπ
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That is so sweet. Thank you so much!β€π«
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such a lovely poem! and illustration as wellπ
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!π
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Nice poem!!
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I am really happy to hear that Pannaga. Thank you so much!!π
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This is an amazing poem
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Thanks a lot Simran!!π
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Wise message, Jan! Love the quote! β€
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!π
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Love it! π. So true. Jealousy is actually kind of endearing isnβt it?
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Great poem, Jan. I love it. βΊοΈ
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you so much Jeff!!π
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Youβre most welcome, Jan. Always! βΊοΈ
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your poetry is toooooooooo heart touch
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Thank you so much for your kind words!!π
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Your poems are really fascinating. π
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That is nice to hear. Thank you so much!!π
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