
I walked through the hills
That are taller than any will
The Italian air to fill
The wind made me shrink
My eyes somehow blinked
My heart seemed so big
I thought about the fig
That grew near the twigs
My eyebrows frowned
I watched the fields below
The sun shined like a crown
My mind seemed to allow
I look beyond to the sky
And smile so bright and wide
That my heart seem to fly
My happiness unable to hide
– Jan @jahnavigouri

Question: Hello dear writers and fellow poets. Do you think you will be able to write sad poems when you are happy or do you think your feelings are reflected on your writing? You can answer me in the comments below.
Wonderful poem!
i think sad poems can be written anytime, but to write a haapy one is difficult when you aren’t happy
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Thank you so much Riya. I think that is true!!
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Ooh, the way you have captured the feeling of happiness in a moment is lovely, Jan!
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Aww Thanks a lot Blue! I am happy to hear that.
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Wonderful piece. Great flow.💕
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!💕
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You are very welcome .💕
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😍😍❤❤ no words to express😅
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Thank you so much for reading!!❤❤
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You’re most welcome Jan❤✨
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Your poem certainly worked for me. I’m smiling
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!😊
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Loved the poem! I personally can write sad poems whenever I want. But ig, for most people, it’s only when they are feeling sad, they can write it. Or you know, many people write sad poems. It’s the happy poems no one does. Happy is difficult!
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I think that is true. Happiness is really hard to write when you aren’t feeling happy.Thanks for this wise answer Pannaga!!😊
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This is indeed a happy write Jahnavi ❤️
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Thank you so much! I am glad to hear that.❤
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Wow! Beautifully written. Keep writing more and more beautiful poems Janhavi 👍
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!💗
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My pleasure 💗
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Lovely poem and quote, my friend!
To me, writing is seldom a reflection of mood. I can absolutely write happy poems when I’m sad and vice-versa, but I guess being authentic in the expression of our emotions can have a healing effect and act as a vent.
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Thanks a lot. That is true Sam. Yes, writing our feeling down can have a healing effect. Thank you so much for this thoughtful answer!!😊
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‘I walked through the hills
That are taller than any will’
I loved this line! Beautiful.
And to answer your question: I quite often write happy poems, when I’m sad and sad poems when I’m happy. I suppose it’s a way of balancing things out.
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Thank you so much!! I am happy you loved it. Wow! That is nice to hear!! Thank you very much for this wise answer!😊
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Beautiful poem, Jahnavi!
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I am happy you think so. Thank you so much!!!😊
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Love it, just rings with positivity. Thanks for sharing 🙂
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I am so glad you liked it! Thank you so much!!😊
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Wonderful
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!😊
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🙂 Most welcome.
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Beautifully written, Jan!
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Thank you so much!!😊
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Welcome!
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This poem is so hopeful
Do you think you will be able to write sad poems when you are happy or do you think your feelings are reflected on your writing?
I feel like I write best when I am writing what I feel but I can still write happy poems when I’m sad the only thing is that they seem fake then
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Thank you so much Simran. I liked your thoughtful answer. Thank you so much for answering. I am happy to hear your thoughts!!😊
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Beautiful poem, I love the flow throughout your lines. Thanks for sharing!
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I am so happy you think so. Thank you so much!!😊
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Of course, I loved it! You’re most welcome my dear. I’m happy to have come across your page.
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I love this so much! I even saved this post so that I can always come back and read it over again.
I feel that my feeling are reflected on my writing.
Keep writing!!
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Wow! I am so glad. Thanks you so much for reading!😊💛
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Beautifully written !
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Wow! I am so happy you think so. Thank you so much!!
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Pleasure always 😀
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Pretty poem.:-) I think it’s much easier to write a poem about the mood I’m in, not a different mood.
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Thanks a lot. Wow! I am glad to know that. Thanks again!
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I love it
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I am glad you loved it. Thank you very much!!💫
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Poetry for me is to channelize my sadness into beautiful words. Also, can’t recall if I ever wrote when I was happy, haha!🤭
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Wow! That is a great answer. Thank you for answering!!😊
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That’s an amazing poem! Can’t wait to read more!
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Aww Thank you so much!!😊
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🙂 No problem
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If our emotions are not reflected in the words of our poem then it won’t be worth it.
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