I closed my eyes
Escaping pain
I closed my ears
Hiding I am afraid
I stitched up my sorrows
Leaving everything in vain
My fears made new burrows
My words forgot to remain
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Pain: A Poem
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I closed my eyes
Escaping pain
I closed my ears
Hiding I am afraid
I stitched up my sorrows
Leaving everything in vain
My fears made new burrows
My words forgot to remain
-Jan @jahnavigouri
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So beautiful and profound, loved it a lot♥️💕
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Thank you so much!!!❤💕
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This was wonderful, as always! I really liked this line: My fears made new borrows.
Lovely poem on pain, Jan!
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That is so wonderful to hear Blue. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!💙
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Melancholic and beautiful.❤
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Thank you so much Aaysid!!!
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You are most welcome. 😊
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The consequences of ignoring a truth, well written 🙂
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That is nice to hear. Thank you so much!!😊
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Absolutely beautiful . Love it.💕❤️💕
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I am happy you loved it. Thank you so much!!💕💕💕
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My pleasure.💕
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These lines really touched me 😢💔
I stitched up my sorrows
Leaving everything in vain
Well written once again Jan❤😌
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Wow! I am so happy to hear that Ebar! Your comment brought smiles. Thank you so much for your lovely words!!❤💕
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You’re most welcome☺❤
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Beautifully expressed!
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I am so glad you liked it. Thanks a lot!!
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Anytime !
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Beautiful, Jan. ☺️❤️
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Thank you so much Jeff!!! I am so happy to hear that.
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You’re most welcome, Jan. Always. ☺️
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Beautifully penned, I really liked it! The quote at the end was lovely.
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Your comment brought smiles. Thank you so much!!
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beautifully penned!
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So beautiful! We always try to hide our sorrow! Thank you for sharing 🙂💕❤
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I am so happy you think so. Thank you so much for your kind words!!❤
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My pleasure 🙂🎉💕God bless you 💕❤
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It’s a wonderful and really deep poem!
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I am glad you think so. Thank you so much!!
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My pleasure!
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such a nice poem!! i loved reading it💕 also your blog is so pretty <33
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much for stopping by. Wow! Thanks once again!!💕
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So beautiful!
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Thank you so much!!💫
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!!💫
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Such a profound emotion in your words 💗
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment!💗
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Gosh, this was dark!!
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Thank you for reading!!
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Beautiful words
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Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!!
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Nicely written! Vivid imagination 👍🤝
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Thank you very much!!
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Nicely penned : )
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I am so happy you think so. Thank you so much for your lovely words!!😊
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Love the line – my fear made new burrows!
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I am happy you loved it. Thank you so much!!
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