
Brown eyes hiding anger
One thought on my mind linger
Smiles hiding lies darker
My heart turned more blanker
Searching places for their name
Words making sounds all same
Time passing future lame
I paused and watched all his games
Eyes softer telling things kind
The short walk bruising my mind
Dropped the glasses made to find
Lies deeper we all hide
– Jan @jahnavigouri

This is wondrously innocent, cute, and stunning! Simply loved it 🥳😃
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Your words mean a lot to me.Thank you so much! I am really glad you liked it!!😊
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Most welcome! Cheers🥳🥂
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This is beautiful!!😍
There is a quote from Charles Dickens famous book “Great Expectations” where Joe says: “Lies is lies, Pip”. (Joe is an illiterate iron smith (I believe) so that’s why his English is bad)
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Thanks Ebar! I have never read ‘Great Expectations’ by Charles Dickens but that quote is really true. Thanks for reading!!♡
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No problem Jan!!💐
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Beautiful, Jan. ☺️👏
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Thank you so much Jeff! I am glad to hear that you liked it!!😊
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You’re welcome, Jan. Always! ☺️
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Love this, Jan. Beautiful .💕
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That is so nice to hear! Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!💕
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My pleasure.💕
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Extremely wise yet sweet and innocent. Lovely, my friend!
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I am happy you liked it Sam! Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!😊
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So beautiful 😍😍
Loved it!!!
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I am glad you think so. Thank you so much!!😊
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this is so true, lies are lies, whether big or small. Loved reading this!!
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Yes, yes it is. I am happy you liked it Dhriti! Thank you so much!!❤
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Aw awesome Jan! Your writings are always so beautiful!!! (:
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Aww thank you Stara!! I am so happy to hear your thoughts! Thanks once again!! 😊
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(:
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Very true. We’ll written. Liked the rhyming scheme too Jahnavi!
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I am happy you think so. Thank you so much for your kind words!!❤
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*well
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Lies are lies
So beautifully penned , 🌷❣️
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Thanks a lot! I am glad you liked it!!❤
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the rhyming( always the rhyming❣❣) is wonderful!!
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I am so happy you like the rhyming!! Thank you so much!!😊
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This is wonderful!!
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I am glad you liked it! Thanks!!😊
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You’re welcome!
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Very true, great poem 🙂
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Thank you so much! I am glad you liked it!!
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Absolutely Amazing!❤❤
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I am glad you liked it! Thank you so much!!❤
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Lovely, as always!!!
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Thank u so much Nehal!!🌞
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Great piece.💕
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Thank you so much!!🌞
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My pleasure.💕
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Beautiful poem Jan loved it 🌸
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!🌞
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I find this beautiful.
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Thank you so much!!☺️
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So wise yet inncoent
Love this!!
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I am glad you loved it! Thank you so much!!😊
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Your poetry is so BEAUTIFUL. You put into words exactly what I struggle to convey.
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I am happy to hear that you liked it. Thank you so much!!😊
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<3.
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👏👏👏
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Beautiful poem 💕
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Thank you so much!!😊
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Nice! 💗
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