The shadows are growing
My heart is falling apart
The thrones are bruising
My time is passing fast
Loneliness is turning
My mind to sand
The sand is flying
I collect them in my hand
I draw with an ease
I seem to find
I somehow teased
The last second of my mind
I fastened my pace
The clouds are moving fast
I saw it in a daze
I got there at last
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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Wow loved it! Deep and so true ❤️
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I am happy you loved it. Thank you so much Rabhya!!❤
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Always dear! Keep writing! I always find your poems relatable! ❤️❤️
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You write very well! I love this!
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Thank you so much!!😊
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Beautifully written Jan❤
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Thank you so much Ebar!!❤
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Awesome read , dear Jan, I enjoyed , every line❤️
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Thank you so much!! I am happy you think so!!😊
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👏🤩wonderful!
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Thank you so much Riya!!😊
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This was so beautiful. I absolutely loved reading this so much ❤
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I am happy to hear that.Thank you so much!!❤
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You’re welcome!
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but you got there and we got a great message!! 💖
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Thank you so much for reading!!😊
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Yes of course!!💕🥰
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A lovely poem about patience and perseverance. Lovely, Jan.
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Thank you so much Jeff! I am happy you liked it!!
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You’re welcome, Jan. Always.
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Deep🖤
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Thanks very much akshita!!😊
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The sec stanza, nice imagery Jan.
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Thank so much maria!! I am happy you liked it!!
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Ah, just so lovely.
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I am happy to hear you think so. Thanks a lot!!
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I like how your poetry skills just get better and better with each post! Wonderfully penned, my friend.
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Wow! Your words made my day Sam. I am so happy you like my poems. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!! Your kind support is much appreciated!!❤
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This felt so mystical ✨
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Thanks for reading Ashmita!! I am glad you liked it!!😊
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Patience does pay. Wonderful!
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Thank you so much!!😊
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My pleasure. 💙
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A beautiful write Jahnavi 💚
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Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it!!😊
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Awesome!!! 😍
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I am so happy you think it is awesome Nehal!! Thank you so much!!😊
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Love this ❤
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Thank you so much! I am happy you loved it!!❤
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Wow, this was so deep… Loved it! Very Well Penned ❤
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Thank you so much Anisha!! I am happy you liked it!!❤
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Loved it! I just started following your blog. 🙂
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Wow! I am happy you loved it. I just visited your blog. It is awesome. And thanks for the follow😊
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Welcome. Thanks for following me.
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Amazing poem!
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Thank you so much! I am happy to hear that.🌠
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Reblogged this on Indian Travel + Life.
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