
A forest girl she was
Sprinkling dust from her hand
Marigold flowers slowly sang
She is the princess of this land
The blue flowers bloomed atlast
Her hairs twinkled as if in a task
She had eyes loveliest of all
She became the princess of their land
She smiled better than all the stars
The sun itself loved her little flaws
She sang songs unknown to her land
Her voice was something better than hands
She was someone who loved the wind
Her little hands swayed with its every hint
She once said it was all so thin, the way we talked and the way she will think
She smiled and said joy will last
Her land liked her for her little laws
She cried at nights thinking about fatal lows
At morning pretending to be like they know
– Jan @jahnavigouri

what a wonderful poem and so well shedding light on what so many feel on the inside pretending on the outside! ππππ
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I am so happy you liked it Cindy. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support!π
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You’re so welcome! I loved it and i’m so glad as the feeling is mutual! π
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Great work β€
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Thank you very much! I am glad you liked it.π
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Girl, this was so well written. You nailed it!
The flow of the poem, ah ma zing!
I love this!β€
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Wow! I am really really happy to hear that akshita! I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!β€
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As always you played very well with words..Well writtenππ»βπ»
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That is so amazing to hear Athira!! Thank you so much for your kind words! I really appreciate it.π
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My pleasure
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Such a Beautiful poem β€οΈ
Very well written ππ
Just Loved it!!! π
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you so much!ππ
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A beautiful poem, Jan. Love the picture as well.
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I am happy to hear that you liked it. Thank you very much!
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You are welcome!
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Sweet!
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you thought so.π
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It is a lovely poem!π
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Thank you so much Aaysid!β€
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You are very welcome.π
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Beautifully written, Jan. Wonderful piece.π
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Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it. π
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I sure did.My pleasure.π
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Amazing Jan! Like always! You really have a way with words!!!
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Aww thank you so much Stara. I am happy to hear that. Thanks once again.π
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This is an amazing poem, Jan! β€οΈ
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I am glad you liked it Dhriti. Thank you so much!!β€
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Lovely and soft as a lullaby! Beautifully composed!π
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much for your lovely words!!π
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So beautifully crafted jahnavi β€οΈ
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support.β€
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Awesome one dear.
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Thank you so much!!π
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Mine pleasure dear
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Wonderful poemπ₯°
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So sweet, Jan!
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Thank you so much Maria!π
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This is such a beautiful poem β€
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you so much!!β€
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a beautifully composed lullaby!
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Thank you so much! I am happy you liked it.
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you are most welcome
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Beautifully written, Jan! I loved the flow and rhymes.
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!π
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Wonderful poem, Jan. Is beautiful. πβΊοΈ
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Thank you so much!!!π«π
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Youβre most welcome! β¨π«
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Yes, I know about those βfatal lowsβ. Deeply moving poetry. β₯οΈ
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Thank you so much! I am happy to hear that you liked it.π
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