Crowns wishing to be taken
Kingdoms begging to be shaken
A queen’s views now questioned
Kings waiting to be unquestioned
Rich now using the poor
A city using its flower
A girl crying for her tower
Old rules breaking more slower
Glories once more forgotten
Empires crumbling like once plotted
Orphans are no longer sorted
The kingdoms are now to be floated
A rich land is now more richer
A poor land is now more poorer
A few plans now becoming clearer
We watch as truth become more dearer
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Fabulous piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much Grace. I really appreciate your kind support.❤
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Truly my pleasure.💕
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this was sooooo good! Dramatic and AMAZING. I love it!!
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Aww thank you so much Sep. I am so happy you liked it 😊
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This is an amazing poem, as always, Jan❤️
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Thank you so much Dhriti! I am so happy you liked it❤
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unfortunately, this is so true. love you penned it down, amazing!!
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Thank you so much! I am glad you hear that you liked it!!😊
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This is amazing Jahnvi. Imaginative yet reality. Wonderfully penned💛💫
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I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much!🌠😊
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Indeed,the gap between rich and poor is growing as we advance…wonderful poem. 🙂
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Yes. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Cutee!!
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Thanks for reading Maria!!😊
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The sad state of the world. You captured it poetically. Well penned!!!!
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I am so happy you liked it.Thank you so much!🌠
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A thought provoking piece, Jan! Loved it. 👌👌
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!🌠
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It’s my pleasure 😊
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Super duper creative, Jan. Wonderful poem! ☺️✨
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I am so happy you liked it Jeff. Thank you so much!🌠😊
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You’re most welcome, Jan. Always! ☺️
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“Rich becomimg richer; poor becoming poorer” – such a striking set of words!!! Brilliantly penned !!!
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you liked it😊
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Real fact. Nice rhyming words.
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Thank you so much!😊
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It’s amazing..splendid
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Thank you so much Athira!🌠 I am happy to hear that you liked it!😊
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Pleasure is mine Jahnavi
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Ooh, this was beautifully written! And it’s true too.
Lovely poem, Jan!
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I am so happy to hear that Blue. Thank you so much!!💙
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Third post of yours I read in a row and once agin, so good!!
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Thank you so much!! I am happy you liked it.😊
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You portrayed the bitter truth very beautifully❤
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am so happy to hear that!!😊
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