My dreams have faded
All wishes now shaded
Faraway lands now invaded
My feelings are all now tainted
Where are the things I seeked?
Life is becoming meaningless to me
I can’t even see the future, you see
I am trying to see myself free
Everyone is abandoning me now
I don’t think about anyone low
Everything is telling me to row
But I don’t think I am worthy, you know
Life is becoming a heartless shell
I am hiding inside afraid to fell
I ask, why can’t I move ahead?
From all the things that are now dead
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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This poem hit hard.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I am so happy you thought so!!😊
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Beautiful and sorrowful..but like they say,there’s always a glimmer of hope amidst the darkest of nights…you only have to reach for it! 🙂
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Thanks for reading and commenting!!!🙂
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“If you have a heartbeat, there is still time for your dreams” – sean stephenson
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That is really a beautiful quote. Thank you so much for reading and commenting Riya!!😊
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This is so relatable and amazing. You are so talented,wonderful poem!
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I am so happy to hear that Dhriti! Thank you so much for your lovely words!!❤
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Wow. This was such a beautifully written and heartfelt piece. Love it!💕
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That is so awesome to hear Grace. Your words mean a lot to me. Thank you so much!!🌠
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Always a pleasure .💕
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this is beautiful💗
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Thank you so much!! I am so happy you thought so🌠
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Deep, powerful, and painful emotions, so well expressed, Jan! Profound. 💔✨🌸☺️
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Thank you so much Jeff! I am so happy to hear that.🌠
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You’re welcome, Jan! Always. ✨✨
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so well written Jan and so true of being human sometimes! 💖
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So happy you thought so. Thanks a lot Cindy!!💖
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A pleasure Jan.. you’re so welcome! 💖
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Your writing skill is so great.
Your dreams will come true
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Wow! Thank you so much!! Your words are an inspiration to me 😊
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Very impressive 👍
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I am happy you thought so. Thank you so much!!🙂
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No problem, have great day 🌻🌻🌻
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I love the rhyme scheme here!
Beautifully penned 🧡
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I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much!!💖
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nice ❣️
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This was beautiful 💜
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So happy you liked it. Thank you so much!!🙂
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You’re welcome 🖤💜
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very good poem. 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🙂
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much!🌠
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You are most welcome 💖
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Your words have conveyed beautifully the deep rooted fear of abandonment! Wonderful expression!
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I am so happy to hear that you liked it. Thank you so much Harshi!!😊
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Impressed, a lot. Well composed.
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I am so glad you liked it. Thank you so much!!🙂
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Great. Keep up your good work 👏
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Restart dreaming, with better understanding, more love and “identify” the purpose.
We’ll fell and broke many times. But that doesn’t stop us from.
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Yes, Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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moving ahead.
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I think it’s facing fears which makes us stronger. Such a relatable poem , Jan! 💓
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True. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!🌠💖
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such a great poem Jan… it’s a tough time in our world right now and I think everyone has ghese sentiments. 💖💖🌻🌻
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting Cindy!!💖💖🌠🌠
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How I love the aching feeling and poignancy alive in this piece!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! So glad you think so🙂
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The words rung true and hit deep!
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Thank you so much, Maha! I am so happy you liked it.😊
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