
To where the river flows
The place nobody sees
To there my secret goes
When somebody speaks
To blue gardens in snow
I alone now flees
To the hills that we go
When I am no more to be seen
To the forgotten lands
I walk through the sand
To the shallow little plants
I had longed to keep in my hand
To the fallen people below
I bow now very low
To me for being alone
I am a wanderer of unknown
– Jan @jahnavigouri

A lovely composition dear. Beautiful.
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
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Your lovely poetry made me remember a small poem I wrote a few months back. 😀
http://gypsieswritingmusingsquotesgripes.com/2022/03/22/mother-of-all-rivers-2/
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Wow! That is so awesome! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!😊
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Wonderfully written ❤
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So glad you thought so maria!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!❤
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Well written and touching ,everyone is wandering to discover the real destination
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!😊
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Wonderful piece. LOVE the flow.💕
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So happy you liked it Grace!! Thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind support!!💖
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Always a pleasure.💕
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Wow, a gorgeous poem, Jan. So introspective and lovely! ☺️
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That is really amazing to hear Jeff!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!😊
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You’re most welcome, Jan! Always. 😊
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Beautiful poem! Aaagh, you’re such a good writer Jan!
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That is a honour to hear Naomi!! I am so happy to hear that!! Thank you so much!!😊
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Amazing Jan! Being honest I haven’t opened one of your poems in my reader for a while heh. I’ve been ignoring posts in my reader.
But I loved this so much. It was beautiful, synced and had a mysterious grin to it.
Loved this and keep writing Jan!
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Oh! Thank you so much Stara! So glad you liked it!!🍁🍁
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Fantastic! This is great
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Thanks a ton Dhriti!! So glad you think so!!😊
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Wow.. that was awesome 👍🏼❤️❤️
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I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much!!😊
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much!! I am glad you liked it.😊
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Splendid lines ❤🌹
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!!😊
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Beautifully penned!
Wanderers of the unknown are always on the right path.
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Yes, thank you so much for your wonderful comment. I really appreciate your kind support!!!😊
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Well written!
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