
Hundred thoughts here and there
My feelings now more and more rare
She walked and talked it not fair
Talking aloud she didn’t dare
“They followed me,” the boy then cried
His tears went away but never they dried
He begged her “Please do try.”
But she shooed him away, he then sighed
The villians are not just in fairy tales
They are everywhere don’t you fail
She watched them and their every sails
But he had gotten away from the trails
We should escape before they see
Our life would be useless, don’t you see
The boat is waiting for you and me
We just have to get away from here free
The boy packed his songs and toys too
She took her pens and notes now two
They looked here and there to sew
All the faces that would cry when they flew
– Jan @jahnavigouri

You are so gifted, Jan. Wonderful piece.Love the quote.💕
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That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much,Grace. I really appreciate your kind support!!❤
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Always a pleasure 💕
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How beautiful this is, Jan. Wonderful poetry! ✨✨
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Thank you so much Jeff! I am super happy you liked it.🌠
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You’re most welcome, Jan! Always. ✨✨
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Such a smart idea and amazing true poem Jan!
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Thank you so much Cindy. I am so glad you liked it.😊
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“They looked here and there to sew
All the faces that would cry when they flew
i am in love with these lines
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So happy to hear that you loved it akshita!! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!😊
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My conscience flew with your sweet poem❤
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!🌠
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Beautifully penned Jahnavi ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked it!!😊
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Very beautifully written ❤🌹
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That’s so nice to hear!! So happy you thought so. Thank you so much!!😊
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This is absolutely beautiful 💕
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Poignant yet devoid of drama. Echoes of strife, pain and anxiousness can be heard but I love the simplicity of the poem. Well written.
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Thank you very much Harshi!! Your comment make my heart fill with gratitude. I really appreciate your kind support!!🌠
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Hi Jahnavi,
Earlier, I used read the ‘words’ of your poem, and try knowing their meaning in my way.
Now I realise this is not the best approach.
I congratulate you for creating the lovely ‘theme’ of your poems. 🥳😍
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Thank you so much for reading!! I appreciate your kind support!🙂
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good ❤️❤️
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you thought so🌠😊
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👍👍
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The last two lines are just so fabulous!
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Thank you so much Bhavya! I really appreciate your kind support🌠
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