New life : A poem

Words words have you left me
Hope hope I do not see
Wind wind by the sea
Please please come to me

World world have you gone
Time time now have flown
Walk walk till the zone
Wish wish they do groan

Where where I don’t see
Prize prize promised to me
There there I now see
Land land meant to be

Hand hand reached to see
Lake lake by the tree
Smile smile my child in glee
She she is now free

-Jan @jahnavigouri


46 thoughts on “New life : A poem

  1. Your poem structure is quite striking in the way you repeat the first word twice in each line. Is this a poem structure you followed or created?

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    • I like to experiment with different ways poems can rhyme. This structure just struck with me somehow after I used it for one of my previous poems called ‘Dolphins’. I felt like it would be great to use it for this one too. Thanks for reading and commenting!!🌠

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