All my wishes would come true see
Look there Look here now to free
I am walking slowly don’t you see
My dreams My dreams waiting for me
Look now Look now far in sight
I can’t see you in my fright
My love and sorrows dark in light
I watch they watch moon in night
Hear me They see I can’t save
Nobody Nobody looking brave
I hope they hope life is strange
Maybe Maybe life would change
Before I hoped to dance in tune
Life it turned falling too soon
Now my only solace in this gloom
Is I still watch the roses bloom
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks a ton Dhriti! Your words really brought a smile to my face😊
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Fabulous piece. Love the wonderful flow. Wonderful .💕
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Your words truly made me smile, Grace. I am so glad to hear that you enjoyed my poem. Thank you so much!!❤
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My pleasure.💕
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This is really beautiful, I love the lilting flow of the words!
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So glad you liked it! Thank you so much Sylvie!!😊
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No problem!
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Very deep, very moving with the beautiful light of a blooming rose to carry us through. Lovely piece! ✒️
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. I am so glad you liked my poem. Thanks once again!🌠
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You are most kindly welcome! 😊
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very good 🐝🐝🐝
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Thank you so much🌠 So happy you thought so!!
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Enchanting
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Thank you so much! It is nice to hear that you thought so!🌠
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I love the narrative of this lyrical and atmospheric poem!
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I am so glad that you liked it! Thank you so much for your lovely words. I really appreciate your kind support!!😊
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Painful and so beautiful, Jan. A lovely write! ✨🌹
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Jeff. I am so happy to hear that you liked my poem. Thanks once again!!🌠
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You’re most welcome, Jan! Always. ✨✨
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As always the flow of this poem is so so sooo good🧡
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So glad to hear that akshita!! Thanks a ton for reading and commenting!❤
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Amazing!!
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Thanks a lot🌌🌌
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“I still watch the roses bloom” ~the power of hope is well evident in your lines. Something raw and pure. And also, the rhyming and flow of the poem is perfect!
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That’s is so awesome to hear! I really appreciate your thoughtfulness. Thank you very much for your lovely comment
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I adore this.. It has such a beautiful rhythm to it.
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Thank you so much. So happy you liked it🌠
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It’s my pleasure.
I love your style and I look forward to seeing more!
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Nice
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Thank you so much! So happy you thought so.😊
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Your sweet words develop into a rose.
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That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
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