
Bottle up again
Love for the one
Made no more gains
Love to you done
Sadness will follow
One day to you
I never did allow
Love left to few
Cry in the darkness
Villains on the sea
Smile in bitterness
That is what they see
Splash in the river
Left to the dead
Never lie to the giver
Who is never fed
I am no stranger
They say to me
Whisper I am danger
Unknown to see
Why waste words
When have nothing to give
Give another curse
And let them see
– Jan @jahnavigouri

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Beautifully written Jan ๐๐๐
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it๐๐
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My pleasure ๐ท๐
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Another great piece. Wonderful flow.๐
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Thank you so much, dear Grace. Your kind words always bring a smile to my face.๐
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Happy to hear that. Thanks so very much.๐
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!๐
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Powerful words.
Exceptionally well written poem.
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I am so happy that you thought so. Thank you so much for your encouraging words!!๐
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I hope the the rest of your poetry is as good as this one! I really liked it!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I really appreciate your kind support๐
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Dee and powerful, Jan. A wonderful write! โจโจ
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Thank you so much, Jeff. I really appreciate your kind and encouraging words๐
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Poignant and heartfelt. Goodness, that was beautiful. Brilliant!
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Thank you so much, Joyce! Your words make me super happy ๐
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Awww, Iโm glad to hear it. So do yours.
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I love the emotion skillfully packed into the imagery throughout this poem!
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Thank you so much, Jaya! I am honoured to hear your kind words. Thanks again!! ๐
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What an awesome piece! Love the flow of the words, they mesh together beautifully ๐
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Thank you so much! That’s so nice to hear. So happy to hear that!! ๐
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such a wonderful poem Jan!! ๐๐๐
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Wow โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ wonderful poetry ๐๐
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I am so grateful to hear that you liked it, Annaya!! Your kind words means a lot to me. Thank you๐
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Hi jahnvi I like your poems โฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธโฃ๏ธ
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So happy to hear that you like them! Thank you very much.๐
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