I watched the night sky
The stars blinked and died
Darkness enveloped my mind
The moon became a melody
The night sang a memory
I closed my eyes tight
Nostalgia controlled my heart
A feeling that can’t be taught
The darkness faded away
The dawn now blinked at me
The night I can no more see
It faded like it is meant to be
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Beautiful ππ it is meant to be despite how dark the night can be π
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Yes. Thank you so much for reading!! I really appreciate your kind supportπ
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π it’s my pleasure.
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Awesomely written! Love the photographs to your words π
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I am so happy you loved it. Thank you so much for your kind words! I truly appreciate itπ
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good ππ
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Thanks!
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Very good π
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So happy you thought so. Thank you so much for your kind words!!π
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Welcome π€ visit my site too
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This is so beautiful . I absolutely love the flow. Wonderful as always.π
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Thanks a lot dear Grace. Your kind words really means a lot to meππ
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Truly my pleasure.π
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Such beautiful lines
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I am so happy you liked it. Thank you so much!!π
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oh I love the fades of the night Jan! ππ
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Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, dear Cindy!!πππ
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youβre work is always a gift in my dayβ¦ youβre so welcome! ππ
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Absolutely gorgeous. It reminds me of the saying, βEven though you may not see the stars in the daytime, they are always there, just waiting for the right moment to shine.β
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That’s truly a great saying with a powerful meaning.Thank you so much for your kind words!!π
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Youβre very welcome. Thank you for sharing your wisdom as well.
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Wow! Such a beautiful poem, Jahnavi.. so deep! Because good times will come no matter how dark your current situation is!! Lovelyπ€©πππΌππΌ
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Yes, that is so true Deeksha. Thank you so much for your lovely words. I truly appreciate itππ
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how do you manage to write such wonderful poetry all the time?
this is sooooo good
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I am so honoured to hear your words, akshita. Thank you so much for kind support!ππ
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ahhhhh this is so so so BEAUTIFUL ππ EXCUSE ME WHILE I READ IT OVER AGAIN BECAUSE I!! AM!! OBSESSED!! I swear, your poems ARE PERFECTION OKAY β€β€
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That’s so awesome to hear.I am humbled by your kind words.Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!β€
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A great poem! loved this lineβ¦
Nostalgia controlled my heart
A feeling that canβt be taught
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So happy you loved it. Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!!ππ
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You are welcome!
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This poem was beautiful! I can really fill the words and I just absolutely loved reading this!!! Amazing work Jan, keep writing.
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Thank you so much, Stara. Your kind words made me smile. So happy you liked itππ
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What a lovely poem, Jan. Amazing flow of words, and meaningful message! β¨β¨β¨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I am so happy you liked itπ π π
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AHHH THIS IS SUCH A STUNNING POEM!!! Iβm in awe eekk!!π«π«π«π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί all of your poems are just brilliant!!πππ
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I am honoured to hear that, Suhani! Thank you so much for your lovely commentπππ
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Vry nice ! Beatiful poem π
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This poem brings about a calm and a note of hope! Well done!
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I am beyond grateful that you liked it, Harshi. Thank you so muchπ
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Love this poem. I like the way that you went up until dawn, showing how temporary it all is yet also how repetitive
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I am so happy to hear that you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your kind words!! I truly appreciate itπ
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I like it too
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So happy you did. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!π
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Gentle and sweet π
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