Hundred broken dreams in sight
I tried to fly but fell in fright
My wished broken, a shallow knife
My lullabies standing at the edge of life
The sky lit up in a thousand lights
I wiped my sadness and watched the night
My future blinking with a cry
A lonely heart mixed with a narrow sky
Every dream I had always kept
Came to haunt me and the wishes crept
I stared at the bridge and quietly wept
The lakes beyond and stars to let
Hundred ways but none in sight
Doors all closed but under it light
Wished for rain and came the night
Past I held on with a shabby might
– Jan @jahnavigouri

Beautiful poetry!
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Thank you so much! Happy that you liked it🌠
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Owsom lines Dear 💕💕
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Another beautiful piece. Love the flow. Wonderful .💕
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! So happy that you loved it💞💞
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Truly my pleasure.💕
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no one:
me: i’m in love
they: WITH WHO?!!
me: with jan’s poems.
they: …
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Anjali! Your comment made me smile. I truly appreciate your kind support!!😊🌠
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Haunting, beautiful read.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Very welcome 🙂
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Wonderful poem, Jahnavi 💖👏🏼
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Thank you so much, Deeksha!!💖
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ADSHAJAKJAHAHAA i LOVE THIS SO MUCH!!!! EXCUSE ME WHILE I GUSH OVER IT FOREVER 😭❤❤
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So happy you loved it, Anoushka!! Thank you so much for your lovely comment! I truly appreciate it! ❤
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Powerful. Thank you for this thoughtful, poignant read.
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So happy that you liked it. Thank you for reading and commenting!!🌠
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It was a wonderful read. Thank you so much for sharing it!
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There’s so much pain in your verse, yet the end is still hopeful. A gorgeous poem, Jan! I loved this one. ✨✨
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So happy to hear that you loved it, Jeff! I truly appreciate your kind support. Thank you so much🌠
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You’re most welcome, Jan! Always. ✨✨
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👌👌
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!
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Beautiful capture of words
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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This is beautiful and heart-rending, and so well written, Jan. Wonderful to experience. Well done! 🙂
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I really appreciate your kind words!😊
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Beautiful flow of words.. Loved it Jan ❤️
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I really appreciate your kind words, kirti. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!❤
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Loved the rhyming words and the sentiment behind the poem, Jahnavi! The quote by Lewis is absolutely priceless!
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Yes, it is. That quote is very meaningful.I am truly honoured you thought so.Thanks a lot, Harshi!!
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So true
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Thank you so much, Mariya!! Your support is much appreciated😊
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🌷
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Penned down nicely. The quote by Mr. CS Lewis is quite meaningful for life.
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Yes. I am so happy you thought so. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support🌠
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You’re welcome 😊
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Very good
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words🌠
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Your post is like a blessing for us from God…. Loved it 😊😊😊
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I am so happy to hear that😊🌠
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Lovely one with the best wishes for your future 💐
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support.
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🙂👍🏻
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