Memories surfaced, sadness it led
Mistakes made, tears they shed
Happiness to take, a lake of dread
Betrayal done and guilt it fed
Placing a bit of sand in hand
I took it then and your magic wand
Words from me, like you want
You made yourself a truthful land
Now those words shoot back at me
At that moment it shouldn’t be
Your mind took notes, unknown to see
I buy it now, how foolish of me!
Secrets placed somewhere deep
You took it out wickedly
A foolish heart, poorly leaped
It broke too fast and fell in heaps
I learned a lesson, good to me
Now seeing something, I haven’t seen
Never trust words from a place so lean
Your betrayal looming in my sea
– Jan @jahnavigouri

Yes. On all counts! ((hugs))
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!😊
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My pleasure! ☺️
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Perfectly penned!
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Love this piece. Wonderful. Great quote too.💕
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Thank you so much, dear Grace. I truly appreciate your kind words❤
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Truly my pleasure.💕
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So true, and beautifully crafted.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I truly appreciate it🌠
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Awww, you’re very welcome. Thank you for sharing.
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A poignant piece, Jahnavi. Wonderfully expressed😄👏🏼
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Thank you so much, Deeksha! I truly appreciate your kind support😊🌠
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Your welcome, Jahnavi🤗
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Poignant 🖤
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Thank you so much, akshita! I truly appreciate your kind support🌠😊
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Betrayal is so painful, and you’ve expressed this pain so eloquently. This is a wonderful poem, Jan. 🙂
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Thank you so much! I am so happy that you liked it.🙂
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That’s a painful one that resonates, Jan. Amazing write. ✨☺️
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So happy to hear that you liked it, Jeff. Thank you so much for your kind words🌠😊
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You’re most welcome, Jan. It’s always my pleasure. ✨☺️
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much. So happy you liked it😊
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“Betrayal done and guilt it fed ” This line encapsulates the core of the poem!
The quote which you’ve used Jahnavi as absolutely heart shattering and soul stirring!
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On point ♡˖꒰ᵕ༚ᵕ⑅꒱
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Thank you!😊🌠
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Penned very well! ❣️
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Thank you so much!!💖🌠
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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This is absolutely true and beautifully written, Jan! The world needs to read this.
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