She knew her life was wounded
She glided on its broken wing
Her dreams crept a bit haunted
Love and happiness she sings
Drowning on her mind all alone,
thoughts wept in the mist
Her dreams glittered high above
A marvelous tale its gift
She cradled her fragile heart
A song blooming in it
She is a star amidst the dark,
a wonderful twinkle she lit
The universe in her life,
were stories given as a gift
Those tales whispered high above,
her name was what the stars lit
Her smile still glitters the sky
In darkness she never sit
The light she was, amidst the darkness
She was the universe’s gift
– Jan @jahnavigouri
I can’t find any words to describe how amazing and heartfelt this poem feels 💗
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I am so happy to hear that, Zahra! I am truly honoured by your words. Thank you so much!💕
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Aww, I love the sweet message here, and it is just so uplifting!
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Thank you so much! I am truly happy you thought so😊
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I sure did. Now to go check out your latest work. ^_^
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How beautiful, the lines float
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That’s amazing to hear. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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My pleasure indeed.
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Beautiful poem!
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I am glad to hear that you liked it. Thanks a lot!😊
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“The light she was, amidst the darkness
She was the universe’s gift” Beautiful closing lines, Jahnavi and a very lovely poem!
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I am truly honoured to hear that, Harshi! So happy you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!😊
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Amazing piece, Jan. So very beautiful . Love it.💕
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I really appreciate your kind words, dear Grace. I am truly honoured that you liked it. Thank you so much💞💞
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Truly my pleasure, Jan.💕
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Beautiful piece❤
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Thank you so much, Vidah! I am truly happy you thought so❤
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Such a beautiful uplifting Poem Jan! I so agree, you are a beautiful way in the universe!
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I am truly honoured that you thought so, Cindy!☺ Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate your kind support💖💖
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You’re so welcome dear Jan! It truly was and it’s always my joy to read you!💖
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Well and charming composition. Nice sharing ….with the whole world 🌎
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am truly happy you thought so🌠
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Such a beautiful poem Jan.. absolutely loved it. The message at the end is so lovely and inspirational. 💕
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Thanks a lot Kirti! It is truly wonderful to hear that you liked it💕
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You’re most welcome Jan always 💕
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THIS IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL AHHHH 😭😭❤ LOVVVVVEEEEE ITTTTTT!!
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It is amazing to hear that you loved it, Anoushka! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!❤😊
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This is so emotional! Sometimes I think everyone needs to stop and remember we truly are the universe’s gift ❤
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Yes, that’s true. I am so happy you thought so. Thank you so much!❤
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Ahhh, this is beautiful, Jan. 😚😘☺
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Thank you so much! So happy you thought so😊💖
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A pleasure, Jan. Your poems are always cool. 😊
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Lovely poem thank you for sharing, it is so deep and beautiful !
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!💫💫
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It’s a beautiful poem.
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I am glad to hear that you thought so. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🌠
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Take care. 🙂
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Couldn’t put these words together in a better way in this poem❤️ it’s a beautiful poem
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Thank you so much! I am truly glad you thought so😊
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A magical poem, Jan! Gorgeously created and expressed. ✨✨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I am so happy to hear that you thought so.🌠🌠
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You’re welcome, Jan! Always. ✨✨
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Beautiful!
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Great poem I really enjoyed it thank you for sharing!!
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Oh my heart, this is a stunning poem, Jan!! I love your word choice and the mere poetic-ness of this poem, haha! So gorgeous ❤️
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Thank you so much, D! That’s so kind of you to say. I am super-happy to hear that you liked it ❤
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My pleasure!
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🥺 I haven’t read a poem this good in a while, I felt every emotions from, excellent work my dear
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That’s so kind of you to say. Thank you so much!!😊
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Beautiful! ❤️
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I love it. Reminds me of how everyone’s here on this very earth and then they’re not. The stars still twinkle and the little piece of poetry’s still lying under the drawer of the abandoned house.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am so happy you loved it😊
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Great flow of thoughts!
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Very nice! Thanks for sharing
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Nice
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Thank you so much!😊
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Beautifully written 👏
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it😊
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Such a beautiful poem
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How lovely and moving a poem! I love the feeling in the last line. ❤
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I am truly happy to hear that. Thank you so much for your kind words. I really appreciate your support😊
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