Moon in my window
I can see that you’re watching me
Soon by my willow
I can hear your voice in the sea
Thousand miles we go
It is not that old little me
Million memories grow
In bend and forgotten trees
Ancient rhythms sow
A tale so old to preach
My mind it sings low
For a nameless land I reach
I see my window
It stands miles away from me
My old bend willow
Your thoughts drown now in my sea
-Jan @jahnavigouri
OMG, I seriously love this!! ♥️♥️
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So happy you loved it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!😊
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Your lovely poem resonated. I recall my childhood perspective of looking up at the moon in wonder each time I see the moon now as an adult.
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I am happy my poem resonated. Thank you so much! I am happy to hear your thoughts🌠
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My pleasure 😊
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A really beautiful poem. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you thought so😊
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Such a lovely poem Jan!!💕😍
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Thank you so much, Cindy! I am truly honoured by your kind words💕
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You’re so welcome! 💕❤️😘
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Wow, So beautiful. Wonderful flow.💕
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Your kind words and support always means a lot, dear Grace! Thank you so much for the encouragement❤️
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Always a pleasure.💕
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Absolutely lovely. Loved it! The quote is powerful.
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Thank you so much! Your lovely comment truly brought a smile to my face. So happy to hear that you thought so!😊
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Lovely
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Thank you so much!☺
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You’re welcome ☺️
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The little poet took me back to my childhood days.Lovely poem as usual.Keep going.
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Thank you so much, dear ma’am! ❤
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Truly beautiful depiction of the moon and your association with it! Such beautiful words sewn rhythmically!
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Your kind words truly means a lot to me. Thank you so much! I am so happy to hear your thoughts.
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I seriously love this
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So happy you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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There’s always some elegance and sophistication in the way you use your words to portray literally anything and I love it!💓✨
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I am truly honoured by your kind thoughts. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support😊
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Lots of Love from here❤️
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting😊
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Wonderful poem
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Thank you so much!🌠
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You’re so welcome
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Wonderful poetry, Jahn. Beautiful! ✨✨
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So happy to hear that, Jeff! Thank you so much for your encouraging words and kind support🌠🌙🌃
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You’re most welcome, Jahn! Always. ✨✨
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This is lovely, Jahnavi.
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Thank you so much! Happy to hear that😊
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You are welcome, dear. 😊
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I love your poem and your quote; your wisdom amazes me! Thank you.
Joanna
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I am happy to hear that. Truly honoured by your words. Thank you so much!
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This piece is very, very uplifting and encouraging. Thank you so much this!
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Wow! That’s truly awesome to hear. I’m happy you found my piece so. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🌠
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Of course. Your pieces are always incredible and motivational. Keep it up!
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Lovely poem!
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support😊
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I wasn’t feeling the best this morning but this poem evoked a sense of nostalgia and immediately perked up my mood! Thank you for sharing. The flow of this piece was so comforting 🌸
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I am happy to hear that you’re doing better now 😊. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your encouraging words. Have a great week ahead🌠🌆
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I’m falling in love with your poems, each time I read 😌💖Keep up the good work jahn🤝
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Thank you so much! Your encouragement truly means a lot😊
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🤝💖
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Beautifully composed. Nice share 👌
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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You’re welcome 😊
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Nice
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Thank you so much!😊
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So wonderful 🥰
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So happy you thought so. Thank you so much!☺🌌
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Waa
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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I love the poem. Thank you for sharing.
Looking forward for more… *Followed*
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I am so happy to hear that☺! Your words are truly an encouragement to me🌌. Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind support.🌠
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Beautiful 💖🌹✍
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it😊
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Great 👏👏
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Thank you so much!😊
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Nice😊
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Thank you so much!☺ I am so happy you liked it.
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lovely , keep going.. I’m a beginner.
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I am so happy you thought so. Thank you so much!😊🌌
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What a beautiful, lyrical poem! 💕
An absolute joy to read aloud on a breezy summer night!
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That is such a lovely observation, Harshi! I am so happy you thought so. Thank you so much💕
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This lovely poem rhymes beautifully with the heartbeats of moon. A poetic gem and an inspiring creation of yours, Jan.
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Your comment truly bought a smile, dear Annabel💕!! I am honoured to hear that. Thank you so much!☺🌌
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Most welcome, dear Jan💗🌷
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Lovely.
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much, Maria!😊
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Lovely ♥️
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Thank you so much!
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Your welcome
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Nice poem here , love the rhythm such as window > willow, the use of the ow is awesome🙌🙌
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The memory remains
even with your farewell
without words
the future
in the here and now
the presence
just a hunch
the moon leads its circles
all around Mother Earth
the moon moves
Ocean
and the tides
the thought
and dreams
the little me
that stays trapped
the world of the inner world
since birth
until death
the stories
the ancestors
written and told
sometimes appears
in the dream the mother
and the father
I walk my life
not what I of the world
I see and I think
sometimes you touch me
on the inside
where you get into me from
you alienate yourself in me
I don’t know that
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It is sooooo beautiful 😍 🤩 👌 ❤️ ♥️ 💖 😍 🤩 👌 ❤️ ♥️ 💖 😍
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it was beautifully written 🙂
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You literally nailed it .
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Thank you so much! So happy you thought so
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