Eyes twinkle, stolen glitter
I wonder, they chat
Speak now and ask never
Teach them not to start
Hands together hold water
As they slip through, the crack
Mirrors fall and they shatter
Bruises in painted gaps
Ink stains and lost meadows
Endangered little hearts
Lost diaries, dark pirates
Ships sank, waters sad
Howling winds, copper breeze
Heart hollow, sadness freeze
Goodness came, I can’t release
Lone as ocean and dusk, my tea
Sun in brown, moon in blue
Nature gave its charm to you
Yellow silk, pretty hue
Happy times would arrive soon
– Jan @jahnavigouri
excellent 🐢🐢
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I’m in complete awe of how rhythmic your poems are – they seem to have this gentle flow that encourages one to keep reading. Splendid poem as always, Jan!❤️
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Thank you so much, D! Your kind words truly encourage me. I am so happy you liked it💕
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Always a pleasure!
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I love the senses and emotions this hopeful poem evokes! ❤
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Thank you so much! I am truly honoured you thought so❤
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Great lines ❤️
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Thank you so much☺
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Hauntingly hopeful and lovely. Fantastic description made me feel as though I were ethereal too! 😊
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That’s so amazing to hear. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support😊🌌
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You are very welcome J!! 🌹
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You. Write. Such. Beautiful. Poetry!
Also, I LOVE THE FEATURED IMAGE IT’S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING EVER.
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So happy you liked it, Naomi! Thanks a MILLION for your encouraging words. I really appreciate your kind support😊
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Enchanting poetry! 🧚♂️
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Thank you so much🌌
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Wonderfully beautiful and magical poem.
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That’s so awesome to hear. Thank you so much!🌌
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I love the words and artwork you chose. Just lovely. 🦋
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So happy you felt so. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I appreciate your kind support🌠
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Amazing poem. Love it.💕
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So happy you did, dear Grace! Your support always means a lot to me. Thanks!💞
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Always a pleasure 💕
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Full of Hope “Happy times would arrive soon”
Nice share, Jahnavi💐🌹
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I am so happy you liked it! Thank you so much for reading and commenting.🌠😊
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Amazing!
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Thanks!❤️
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Eye chatcher view and thought provoking words
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Amazing! It’s so beautiful
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Thank you!😊
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Good poem🙌🙌🔥
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Thanks🌆🌠
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Wonderful!!
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njxchaygwqgy HIIII!! i’m so sorry for being late to all of your poems, I’VE SERIOUSLY MISSED THEM OK?? and shall catch up soon!! ALSO OMG CAN WE PLEASE TALK ABOUT THE UTTER MAGNIFICANCE OF THIS POEM????? HOW IS EVERYTHING YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING AND GORGEOUS AND JUST THE BEST EVER I AM IN LOVE WITH IT 😭
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Awe-mazing!
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Thanks!!❤️
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Goodness, that was breathtakingly gorgeous, my friend. Brilliant.
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Thank you so much!😊
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You’re welcome. ^_^
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Wonderful poem Jan. Impressive<3
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THANK YOU SO MUCH, Maria! I appreciate your kind words💕
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so beautifully put together!💕
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Thank you! That’s so awesome to hear🌠🌆
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A gorgeous poem, Jahn. I really enjoyed the flow of words throughout. ✨✨
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So happy you liked it, Jeff! Thank you so much for reading and commenting 😊
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Lovely poem jan!
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AHH THIS IS GORGEOUS!! ❤
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Beautiful
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Thanks!
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Wonderfully crafted Jan!
💖💖
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I love your poem it is very majestically written I was taken away for a moment 🙂
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Can’t wait for the happy times
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