Stairs descend down
Climbing can be tough
Eclipse from my soul
A canvas blank and rough
I hold my wounded heart
In hands made of gold
I ask my mind not to start
Nightmares written so old
Memories made, then buried
History is once more made
Sadness can’t be hurried
In wars, we are afraid
Ink spilled on blank faces
Deceit wait to be seen
Men wonder and stitch laces
In clouds their thoughts lean
World run wild with the wind
Forgotten stories laugh
Mystery our hearts would fill
Hold your groud, may you fall
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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“Hold your ground , u may fall,”
thats thoughtful
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I am happy you think so. Thank you so much!🌌
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Welcome
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i just read this thrice. i love it sm 🖤
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That’s so awesome to hear. So happy you loved it 💫🌙
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Nicely written
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Thank you so much, Athira!💫🌙
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My pleasure, how are you doing?
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Loved the scattered rhyming pairs☺.Beautiful piece of work jahn💖
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That’s so nice to hear. So happy you loved them. Thank you!💖
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You’re welcome ☺💖
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” hold your ground, you may fall” , beautiful jan.
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Thank you so much, Maria! So happy you liked it.😊
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Love it, Jan. Wonderful flow.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace!💕
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Welcome, my friend.💕
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Beautiful poem 👏👏👏
Felicidades.
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Thank you so much! Happy to hear that you liked it🌌
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🤗😃🤗
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Lovely imagery ✨
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Thank you so much💫🌙
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Jahna, Please do not go to war with yourself, because even if you win, you lose. Been there , done that !
Jahna is a poet, soft like the morning dew,
I see your words.. then hear my thoughts,
Thoughts that are nothing new,
Your thoughts are crystal and sparkle like the dawn,
Deep as the ocean yet soft as a fawn,
Your wish is to reach out and touch our world,
Your wish has come true ! Because you do !
I wish you peace and joy !
Please ! Keep writing ! They click those cosmic tumblers in my mind.
I WISH you PEACE and HAPPINESS Jahna !
Marc
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That’s so awesome to hear. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your wonderful thoughts. I really appreciate your kind support. Thanks again!🌙💫
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Wow, that was just… wow. A brilliant poem!
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Thank you so much!☺💫🌙
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You’re welcome.
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beautifully written Jan!! 💖💖💖
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Thank you so much, Cindy!☺💕
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always!! 💖
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Love this😭😂
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❤*
That laughing emoji was supposed to be a heart
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Thank you so much, akshita! I am so happy you loved it ☺🌌
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you so much!
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Very welcome.
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“I ask my mind not to start
Nightmares written so old”
Wonderfully penned, Jan! Such beauty in the imagery 💕✨
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Thank you so much, D! Your comment truly encouraged me
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Love it…
Sensation of peacefull.
A quiet place…
Miss G 😊
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Thank you so much!🌠
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Ahh love this!
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So happy you did. Thanks a lot for reading, Saania!
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That was great jahnvi … I request you to grace my space with ur presence and feedback my poetry at https://homemakersthehiddenforce.wordpress.com/2022/08/09/i-am-the-creation-they-warn-you-about/ . Would be an honour to be reviewed by someone like you
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the amazing work of a talented writer.
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Artwork and poetry. Outstanding my friend.
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Superb
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