I watched her every day, the lady in red
She held an old umbrella above her head
She had a frozen smile, joy it fed
To those people who came around her
She lived in a house of red brick walls
It had great many poignant halls
I once walked around it, when I was small
With a neighbour who used to be very tall
The red lady soon became red no more
Her red dresses turned shabby and sore
For a smile, people now implored
A new madness, she explored
She now glared down the door
Sadness circled her eyes in four
“Our red lady, where has she gone?”
Glances said together in a tone
One day we saw the red lady no more
I heard rumours she was gone
To where and when nobody knew
Her house was locked and it remain till now
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Bravo. For me it was lovely and whimsical and deeply sad.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! It is nice to hear that you thought so.
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Thank you for the poem and the motto.
Joanna
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You’re most welcome, Joanna. Thank you so much!
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Your poem is a weekend treat to read and savor, Janš. The red lady could be someone else, but more importantly, I sense that she represents a fragment of ourselves that we have lostā¦ Thank you for the beautiful sharing š·š„
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Wow! What a beautiful observation, dear Annabel. I am so happy you felt so. Thank you so much for the encouragement and support. Have a great week ahead! š
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Most welcome, dear Jan!! And same to you!
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Makes my ā„ ache. š¢
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A surreal poem so well-written!
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So happy you felt so, D! Thank you so much. Your encouraging words truly means a lot to me ā¤
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Always a pleasure!
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Heartbreakingly poignant. There are indeed people like this who appear from time to time. I always hope they are doing all right, wherever they’ve gone.
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I hope that too. Thank you so much for reading and commenting.š
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Youāre very welcome. ^_^
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Beautiful and touching. Love it.š
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So happy you loved it, dear Grace! Thank you so muchš
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My pleasure š
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I really love this Jan. Itās so perplexing always when it happens!
š
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Yes, it is. So glad you loved it, Cindy! Thank you so muchš
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Another well-written poem from you Jahnavi!! Beautiful ā¤ļø
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Thank you so much, Kirti!! So happy you liked itā¤
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You’re most welcome always š
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Nice
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind support.
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You’re welcome Jahnavi.
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Excellent write, Jahn! āØāØ
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Very well written! I love how rhythmic it sounds. You are a great motivation to me
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I am so honoured to hear that! So happy you liked it. Thank you so much!š
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Lovely work! I love the art you chose for the post too. Such a whimsical and melancholic piece.
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Thank you so much, Brooke! I am so happy you liked it.
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Beautiful poemā¦ I love it.
Keep sharing and writing more.
Keep smilingš
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Thank you so much! I am truly happy that you loved it š
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Your most welcome jahnavi š
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This is intriguing piece of writing. I Loved to read it and now I will ponder on it for a while š
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So happy you loved it! Thank you so much āØš
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Hauntingly beautiful, Jahnavi! Poignant and relatable! ā¤ ā¤ ā¤
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Thank you so much! I am happy to hear your thoughts on it ā„ļøāØ
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