
With wet feet I would run down the stairs
My footsteps echoes in the hall
Then I would disappear, fast and fair
I won’t listen to their calls
Past the buildings lined with misery
A bullet staring at the heart
I would compose a contrast elegy
Away and away, I would then float
I would run to that moddish meadow
And grasslands standing there tall
I would never return to that old willow
To joys and sorrows small
Here I would leave people far behind
A hidden rock in the banks
I would put in my pocket there to remind
My past falling through the cracks
Rhymes to the sky I would sing
Then a lullaby one for the sad
Then to the broken branches I cling
Away I would go to far away lands
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Amazing piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! I am so happy to hear you liked it💕
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Beautifully written Jan!
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Thank you so much! Glad you thought so✨
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A brilliantly written poem about the use of one’s imagination to escape to far away lands.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate your kind support🌌
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Beautiful poem, Jan. You can be proud of it.
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Wow! Thank you. I am truly happy you thought so🌠
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Hi Jahnavi,
I’m so happy to being able to read your poems again.
People believe, the soul is immortal, our journey never ends.
If that’s true, temporary anxiety can be avoided.
Writing poems is very helpful here. A poem comes from inside, revealing itself.
Thank you for sharing.🙂
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An enchanting and encouraging read, indeed, Jan! Our imaginations can certainly help us to overcome rough times.
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Indeed! Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So happy you thought so✨
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Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling, my friend.
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There’s a lightness and liberation in this piece that I love, Jan. Wonderfully crafted💜
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Thank you so much for your kind words and support! I’m so happy you felt that way🌌
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Amazing jan. ❤❤
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Thank you so much, Maria!🌌🌌
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Wonderful! A beautiful write, Jahn! ✨✨
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Beautiful Jan!!
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It’s fantastic
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Amazing poem Jan! Well written…can’t wait to read more!
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