
I went on a walk a rainy day
A hundred memories came to play
I asked the rain to stay with me
As I drowned myself in a past unseen
An old path lay infront of me
I slowly walked like through a sea
I stretched my arms to catch the breeze
An unforgettable memory this would be
I painted pictures in the rainy sand
No bystanders there to watch
I smiled at myself and then the land
Waters splashed down from my hand
I then walked back to my tent
As it was the home I now dwelled
I went back through the rainy bends
A joyful memory in my head
Beyond and forever I would say
And remember about this rainy day
When rainy waters failed to stay
Anywhere but in my heart it still lay
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Beautiful…
All the philosophy who come when we walk under the rain…
Miss G 😊
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Yes, Thank you so much! So happy you felt so 😊
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I kind of felt deep and connected to this poem especially on rainy days. Thank you.
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I am so happy you felt so. Rainy days bring great tranquility to my mind. Thank you so much!
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Your welcome! ❤
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Amazing piece, Jan. Wonderful .💕
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Thank you so much, Grace!💕 Love your writings too. So happy you thought so!
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My pleasure. Thank you. I sure did.💕
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Gorgeous ! I love rainy days . I love the design you have in this piece 😍
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Aww! I am so happy you liked my design. Thank you so much!😊🌠
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Loved it 😊 you’re welcome 😀
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A beautiful poem, Jahn. So lovely. ✨✨
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Glad you felt so, Jeff! Thank you so much for your kind words and support🌠 I am happy to hear that.
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You’re welcome, Jahn! Always. ✨✨
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A lovely post. ☔
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Thank you so much! 🌧️😊
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Amazing poem Jan!
I personally loveee the rain!
Love how you put a rainy day into words!!!
Amazing poem, cheery as usual…keep writing!
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Thank you so much, Stara! Your kind words truly encouraged me. You too🌠✨☺
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Reminds me of the poem rain upon the roof! A majestic read Jan!
-kunjal
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Wow! Thank you so much, Kunjal. So happy you thought so💖
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the the playfulness and fun in your great poem rhyming so perfectly jan❣️
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Happy you felt so, Cindy! Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement. I truly appreciate it💖
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Hi Jahnavi,
I fully enjoyed reading, imagining and appreciating this rainy scene.
Thanks for sharing the poem.
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I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you very much for reading and commenting!✨🌙
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Oooh, brilliantly done. Rainy days do indeed have a way of sticking in our mind. ^_^
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind support and words😊
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You are very welcome, my friend. ^_^
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Ahhh I love rainy days too! What a gorgeous poem
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That’s awesome! Thank you so much. I’m happy you thought so.
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Wow. This is beautiful
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Thank you so much! Glad you thought so 😊✨
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Nicely written 😊
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Thank you so much!! 🌠
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Rainy 🌧 days makes me calm. And have good past memories
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That’s amazing! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!🌧️
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