
I see the waiters walking here and there. People, they appear and disappear. I watch them talk and see their faces brimming with joy. My own coffee sits in front of me, untouched. I put down the pen and reach for it. I sip the coffee for a little while and put it back on the table. Then I go back to seeing, hearing and observing closely everything around me.
I am new, my mind echoed. I am new to the place surrounding me fondly. The people, all of them are absolute strangers. They are now painting their faces to my mind for the first time. I would forget, I know that. Memories are made in almost every moment but only some stay in the heart forever. Those are the special ones. The unforgettable ones.
I remember days when I was truly happy from my past. Days when I have tasted freedom and the kind heart of others. I walked down the memory lane and people from my past appeared. My childhood friends, neighbours and others who had touched my life in unknown ways. I remembered my days with each one of them and a tentative smile bloomed on my lips. I heard their words and conversations from long ago, humming on my lonesome heart. My heart fluttered alive and then suddenly the smile vanished as I was pulled back by reality. I came back to the coffee shop where I sat down at the corner table. All alone with a half finished coffee cup in front of me.
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Wonderful piece, Jan. Truly enjoyed. Love it! The second paragraph spoke to me.💕
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So happy to hear that, Grace! Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement💕
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My pleasure truly.💕
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A wonderfully written piece of poetic style prose. ❤
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your kind words and support 🌠
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Beautiful! I love how you ended right where you began. Stunning
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Thank you so much. I’m happy you thought so.😊
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lovely Jan💞
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Thanks, Cindy!♥️
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That’s a deeply beautiful write, Jahn. 👏👏👏✨✨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I’m truly glad you enjoyed🌠
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Lovely!
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Thank you so much, akshita!😊
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Very nice post to motivate me as I’ve moved to a new place 😀.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate your kind support ✨
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Oh, such a beautiful, soothing tale. Thank you so much for brightening my day.
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I’m so happy you liked it. I’m honoured to hear that. Thank you so much!! 😊🌠
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Of course! Keep writing, my friend!
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Very nice, memories can take us far indeed.
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Yes, thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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Well written post Jahna. I can imagine being in that coffee place witnessing the people who appear and disappear , clearly your mind has the ability to store long term memories💯💯💯👏
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I am only at the beginning reading you. But already reason enough to return. Your writing as seen so far, has a lovely “rolling” quality to the language. Very attractive in the ear. Suspect you’re a good story-teller too. Till next…
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I am so happy to hear your kind words. Thank you so much for stopping by and reading my work. I appreciate your kind support and I’m glad to hear your thoughts on it.
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Nicely written
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