
Hundred people in the room
My face holding all the gloom
Withered flowers was once a bloom
Aching, shaking misery loomed
Windows held brilliant views
Clocks ran as time went soon
Faces held in smiles and hues
I lost music dancing to their tune
People, people all around
Nobody came to make a sound
I was from the other town
They whispered but all aloud
I was there but nobody could see
Standing by the wall was little me
Laugh and play, sway in the tree
Fly away soon, while in the breeze
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Fabulous poem, Jan. Loved the rhythm.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace!💕
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My pleasure 💕
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This is lovely!❤
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Thank you so much!❤
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Poignant and beautifully done.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting!✨
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Of course! ^_^
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Amazing piece Jan ☺
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Thank you, Maria!🌠
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Well said!
Keep sharing your thoughts.
Best wishes.
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Thank you so much!🌠
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Outstanding poem!
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Thank you so much✨ I am so happy to hear that ☺️
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This was really pretty! 🙂
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Thank you very much! I’m happy you thought so✨
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Gorgeous flow of words, Jahn! 💞
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Thank you so much, Jeff!✨🌙
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Wonderful poem! It flowers very nicely!
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Glad you thought so, Brooke! Thank you ✨
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