
I could only sit and watch
The night as it slowly pass
Moon blinked away so fast
Am I caged or free at last?
I could never utter truth
Wishes buried under roots
Trees are branched up to roofs
Few are weak, never sure their foot
Proud or crying out in pain
I watch as everything fade
Stars and moon all away
Tears dripped and appear a way
Way to nowhere, sure it was
Wondering whether to lose or grasp
Threads are fragile and lies are plans
Moon disappear, slowly the stars
-Jan @jahnavigouri

Wonderful piece, Jan. Great rhythm.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace!! 💕💕
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My pleasure 💕
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❤️
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Thank you so much for reading! ♥️
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Beautifully written! I love it!
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Thank you so much, Lotus! I’m so happy you loved it 😊✨
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Loved it!!
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It such a wonderful poem dear. Keep going 👍
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Loved it😊👍
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So happy you liked it! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!😊
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This is stunning! I loved every emotional line. Beautiful prose my friend
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Thank you so much! I am elated to hear you thought so 😊✨
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Awesome ❤️
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Nice jhanvi….
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