
Away, away from your reach
Resides a dream upon the breeze
Held together by a wish all free
Knitted from the strands of sea
Angry faces I secretly see
High on the clouds and above trees
Looking down right at me
I run from them, holding my dreams
Stones I collect and watch all day
Wishing a pearl to come my way
Months do pass and nothing change
My little dream run wild and stray
I nurture plants and wish flowers to stay
But like a promise they wither away
I wish to dance and feel wind’s play
On my face and upon earth’s wide plain
Wander and wander I truly will
And run away from their unsure grip
Upon me and hundred who had hoped
To win one day and had eventually stopped
So I decide to go on and on
To where my compass takes, it is home
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Nice picture
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Thank you so much for commenting!! ✨
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You’re welcome! 🌌
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SPECTACULAR piece, my friend!! Love the rhyming and the message here, amazingly well done. I missed reading your beautiful work!! 🤍🤍🤗🤗
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Thank you so much, Grace! I am happy to hear you loved it. Thanks again for your wonderful comment!! ☺️💕
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Of course!! Such a treat reading your work again 🤍🤍🤗🤗
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Truly beautiful writing, Jan. Your poetry is a delight to experience. 🙂
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you felt so. Your comment truly encouraged me! 😊🌠
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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I am so happy you thought so. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ☺️✨
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Such a beautiful poem Jan .. so sorry to be so behind !~! 💞
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Thank you so much, Cindy! So happy you felt so. 💕💕😊
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You’re so welcome! ❣️
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Beautiful poem. Heaven is the perfect motivation to reach freedom.
Hugs from afar.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ✨🌠
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It is a pleasure to read you. May you have a Merry Christmas with your family and may God bless you always.
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🌻🤍
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✨☺️
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Beautiful share ❤
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Thank you so much, Vidah!! ♥️✨
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I especially liked the sentence about flowers withering away. It shows the mortal aspect of everything.
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Glad to hear you liked it. Thank you so much for reading!!✨
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Upon the sky, rhyming very well
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Thank you so much!! ✨
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A beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much!! 🌠
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Beautiful write, Jan! ✨✨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! So happy you liked it 🌠✨
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Sublime lines Jahnavi 🌺
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Thank you so much! Happy you felt so ✨
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👌👌👌
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