
Love in the sky I waited for
Sadness in the sea I seek
Watching my anger take its toll
I walked away from anger’s peak
Tantrum followed me everywhere
Life came to me for thee
Present is what I am waiting for
I am the knight of life’s sea
I escaped from the land of goals
Feelings from heart I preach
Latching my life of locks
Happiness I would someday teach
Love to the moon and stars
The universe embraced me
The nights of nothing but calm
I am someone to be seen
The knight of the sea I am still
My armour became the sea
One day to the sea I would go
And would only return to thee
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Amazing lines, Jahnavi👏
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you found it so. I appreciate your kind support, always.
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Beautiful piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thanks a lot, dear Grace! I am so happy you liked it. 💕
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My pleasure. I sure did.💕
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I’ll never get over how soothing and rhythmic your poems are. They’re beautifully worded and paint such vividr scenes. Absolutely gorgeous, Jan 🙌❤️
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Your words make me super happy, D! I am so grateful you found it so. Thank you so much!! It truly means a lot ♥️😊
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I absolutely love the “armour” line! This whole piece is truly sublime. Amazingly written as always 🤍🤗
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! Your kind words put a smile on my face. I am so happy to hear you liked it. ♥️
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Magnificent poem. 💕
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Thank you so much! So happy you felt so.✨
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Goodness, that was lovely. And what a wondrous Knight of the Sea she is!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Joyce! I truly appreciate your kind support. I’m really happy you thought so 😊
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I sure did. Thank you for sharing.
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Fantastica e prorompente!😊👏
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Grazie mille! ☺️✨
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love your metaphors Jahn! ❤️
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Nice one yrr. Just too good👍😊😉
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Thank you so much! Glad you liked it 😁
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My pleasure✨😌😊
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BUONA SERATA
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Beautiful post
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Beautiful and deep like the sea 💙
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Superb
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Thank you so much 😊
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Your welcome dear
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