
The path I wanted is now broken by half
When people hear my dreams they only laugh
I wish to come first but I became the last
I am wounded and broken, escaping fast
What would I do, I am alone in the dark
I am trapped in a cage, and approach the sharks
I revise and revise, walking down the park
Just to forget everything in a lightning flash
New days unravel fresh new tasks
I have no friends, I run with the rats
Working so hard to be called not smart
Falling to the moon and crushed to the ash
Life is hard but a sweet little thing
I grap on its hand with all my might
I would have to go on, even with no gifts
So let’s run around and fly in its wings
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Painful but true! It’s important to voice a concern through the medium of poetry.
You’re also lending a voice to others. Keep them coming, Jahnavi.
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Thank you so much, Harshi! Your support means a lot ♥️
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Very well written✨
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Thank you so much!! ☺️✨
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Wonderful , Jan. Love that last line.💕
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Glad you did, dear Grace!! Thank you so much. ♥️
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My pleasure 💕
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Beautifully written💕
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Thank you so much. I’m happy you thought so 💕
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I love the spin of your poem and great title. I’m with you here Jahn
“So let’s run around and fly in its wings”. great line! 💞
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Very good writing! Love the way you express your poem.
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it ♥️
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You are so welcome. You are a talented writer! Keep up the good work! 🌷
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Wow.. Nice drawing color and good writing 👌🏻
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it!! ☺️
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Touching to inner self!
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So happy to hear your thoughts on it!! 😊
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🌸🙏🌸
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Really a very amazing poem with such reflective words! Great😊👍👏
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Wow! I am so glad you thought so. Thanks a lot 😊🌠
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Always a pleasure for me🤗
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Wonderful poem, Jahn! ✨✨
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Beautiful poem Jan. It does reflect life’s play and that is How life is 👏
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Thank you so much for your kind words! ☺️
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Fantastic
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I’m a curious person, curious about lives of the people. You can say ‘life’ in general.
But the only thing I can do here is to listen, listen more sincerely and patiently.
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