The water rushing between my feet
The sea sings for echoes to leap
I watch the sun go back to its sleep
And awaiting the moon we breathe
The night blooms up from the deep
The turmoil of the day, it gently sweeps
The voice of the waves, slowly speaks
Dreams of bliss and tear-shed weeks
-Jan @jahnavigouri
How are you this good at writing!! Poetry is the one thing that I cannot seem to write but you structure it perfectly!
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That’s so kind of you to say! Your words make me super happy. Thank you so much! 😁
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No of course!! It really is WOW 🤩
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Lovely poem.
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Thank you so much. That’s so kind of you to say!! 😊
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Soothing!!
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Thank you, Vidah! Your kind words always encourage me! ☺️
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Absolutely love this! ❤️
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I’m super happy you did. Thanks a million! ♥️ I appreciate your kind words 😊
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Great piece ,Jan. Wonderful.💕
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Your comments encourage me, dear Grace! I’m so grateful for your kind support. Thank you so much!! ♥️
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So happy to hear that, my friend. Always a pleasure 💕
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Very nice
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Thank you! 😊
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You rocked it Jahnavi!
It’s too good☺👍
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Thank you so much! I am super happy to hear that!! 😁
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That’s always a pleasure for me🤗
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It’s a beautiful poem, jahnavi!!
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Thank you so much, Anjali! So happy you thought so 😊
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You’re welcome!!
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Delightful piece, Jan!💖
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Thank you so much! I am so happy you liked it 💕😊
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Most welcome!
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Beautiful imagery, Jan! 🙂
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So glad you thought so. Thank you so much!! 😊
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Gorgeous poem, Jahn! 👏👏👏✨✨
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merci j’aime❤❤💟
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this is so beautiful Jahn! Love it! 💞
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