
I would sit here forever, if I could go back to the childhood I had lost
To the little joys that were heaven and the ones that haunted like ghosts
I would go back again and be unaware of the injustices our world host
But this dream I would never fulfil and so I throw it by the rocks
I wish to view the world again, my innocence will be my dock
A little girl can keep her sadness hidden, smile will be my cloak
I shall never wonder about the time or the many looming clocks
I would just go on slowly and slowly away with the worldly flow
I used to make paper aeroplanes and fly them high but not up to the sky
When misery came to knock at my door, I used to silently cry
Nothing pained me more than saying momentary goodbyes
To those I loved dearly and the ones I would never see another time
I still remember the days when everything was gold and nice
When everything you wished for came with no price
When everything you wanted was happiness and good smiles
If I could get my childhood again I will walk miles and miles
I want back those days when the Russian tales shaped my world
When my grandma’s soft voice telling tales was the only thing I heard
Those days when I picked up the old dusty books and the pages turned
Words were my best friends and taught me everything I learned
-Jan @jahnavigouri

Fantastic lines 😊
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Thank you so much! I’m feeling happy to hear you thought so 😊
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Keep it up ☺️
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Truly need that so much every once a while ❤
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Thank you so much for reading! 😊💕
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This hit me deep. I am at that stage right now and really I wish to go back to my childhood where I knew not of the injustice in the world. Because now I see all the unfairness and it irks me
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It feels like childhood passed us by quickly, isn’t it? Thank you so much for reading.
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It did. And it’s so sad but that’s life. Lovely blog
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So sweet and beautiful, Jan.. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! I’m happy you thought so ♥️
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My pleasure. I sure did.💕
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Wow Jan, reading your poem made me feel the childhood I lost and now the longing of it. Wow it’s really good 💗
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Aww, thank you so much, Rabhya! I’m so happy to hear that you liked it 😊💕
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Brings back some early memories… Beautiful!
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind support 😊
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You must be very old😉, like me 👨🦯, to write of memories like this 🤗😊🙋♂️
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Ha ha 😁 Thank you so much for reading! 😊
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A beautiful poem recapturing the innocence, magic and wonder that was one’s childhood. ❤️
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Thank you so much! I am so grateful to hear that you felt so ♥️
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Reblogged this on Ned Hamson's Second Line View of the News.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind support 😊✨
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Aw, such a powerful emotional piece! Sometimes I do think about childhood times and how easier and seemingly more peaceful things were. You captured those feelings beautifully! 💗
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Thank you so much, Jasmine! I am beaming inside and out that you liked my piece. Thank you so much for your sweet comment 💕☺️
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👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻💐💐🥹🥹
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Thank you so much for reading 😊✨
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Thank you very much for writing this beautiful poem.. ❣️
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Awesome dear.
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Thank you so much 💕♥️☺️
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Hi Jahnavi!
I liked the featured image of this blog post, especially for ‘the smiling teeth’.😂
Here’s a highlight of choice:
“I still remember the days when everything was gold and nice
When everything you wished for came with no price”
It reflects my thoughts and wish regarding the childhood.
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I’m really glad to hear that you thought so. Reading your thoughts on my piece made me really happy. Thank you so much for reading. I appreciate your kind support 😊
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Wow!!! What a touching piece, dear friend! One can’t help but remember their childhood in such a bright light while reading this! You took us on a delightful adventure, thank you for that!!!! Soothing, beautiful and exquisite work!!! Keep on shining 🤍🤗
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Ahh I wasn’t sure if this went through! So I left another comment 🤪. Mean every word of both 🥰
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Oh, okay. No problem, Grace. Thank you so much 🥰
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! Your kind words made me really happy. I am so happy to hear that you felt so. This was such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much 😊💕
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What a touching piece, dear Jan!!!! Such exquisite, soothing and beautiful work!!!! Your words took me on a delightful adventure back through my childhood, which is the work of a very talented writer like yourself!!!! So inspired by you, my friend!!! Well done 🤍🤗
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So happy you felt so, dear Grace. It really gives us such delight to take a walk down the memory lane to days when we have felt freedom and sought adventures that still gives us immense joy to think about. I am so grateful and honored to hear your kind words, dear. Thanks a million for such encouraging words ☺️💓
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It’s nice 😎 and mind blowing lines
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Thank you so much. I am so happy you liked it 😁
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Yes dear 😀😀
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This was a such a wholesome read
Childhood is one of the most amazing things we could ever experience.
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Thank you so much. I am really happy to hear your thoughts on it 😊
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Amazing poem. I loved the imagery😊
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you did. Your kind words made me really happy<3
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Beautiful poem
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Thanks ♥️
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I love this Jahn and so delighted you had a wonderful childhood. Hard for some today!💕
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Yes, it is sadly. Glad you liked it, Cindy! ✨💕
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I am speechless
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Thanks a lot 😊
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Beautifully written, and truly hit home, as I’m certain it does for many. Well done!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. So glad it did 😊
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Painful, and so beautiful, Jahn. Love it. 👏👏👏
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Thank you so much, Jeff. Sorry for the very late reply. Have great day ahead ✨
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Really a very nice post Jahnavi! Your posts truly reflects a lot of feelings and nice vibes! Such a great piece with a mere amazing description of our childhood!
Too good👍😊👍🤗
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Thank you so much for your kind words, Yaksh. I appreciate your support and kindness. I am happy you liked it 😊✨
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It’s always a pleasure for me yr and you always deserve it!
Stay happy and stay connected!
Have a good day✌😊
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It would be heavenly to live out our list childhood days.
Very well written
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! 😊
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Very well written ❤️👏👏
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Thank you so much! 😊✨
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Great poem x
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Thanks so much ☺️
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Your poem really resonated with me 🩷 your very welcome x
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