
People surround you, the flower
Like the butterflies in spring
While I stand, a solitary tower
All alone in a lonely hill
I watch you and tears rush by
As I would never be your like
To have so much friends
That you have ones you would dislike
Then one day when the time was dark
When there was no sun for awhile
You went all down, all to dust
Then I saw that you have but died
Then the people went in line
To the new flower that came up
Without even a glimpse to your side
They surround the new one, all up
Then I knew there was joy indeed
To be a solitary tower
Than to have friends for a while
And have them disappear in a shower
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Hi dears, how are you all doing? I was a bit busy with many obligations of my life that I was not able to post anything for a long time. This is a poem that I wrote about how we compare ourselves to others without actually knowing the reality of things. Remember the grass always looks greener on the other side but it is rarely true. I hope you would like it ♥️
Powerful poem, Jan. Wonderful 💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! I feel so happy to be writing again ♥️😁
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My pleasure. Good to hear.💕
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Nice❤️
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Thank you so much ☺️
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I certainly DID like it.
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So happy to hear you did 😊
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Beautifully composed, dear friend. I love the message and flow to it. Such gorgeous writing as always 🤍🤗
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Thank you so much, dearest Grace! So happy to hear your encouraging words. I am so happy you liked it ☺️💕
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Lovely poem! I enjoyed the theme of it, so real about comparison ❤️
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Thank you so much, Jasmine! Really happy to hear your thoughts on it ♥️
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Wonderful.
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Thank you so much ☺️
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This eloquent poem speaks a towering truth.
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Thank you so much. So happy you felt so 😊
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Beautiful poem. ❤️
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Thank you so much ♥️
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So true…beautiful
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Wow jahnavi! Such a lovely poem 💖 The message is conveyed so subtly yet meaningfully! I’m new to your blog so I hope I’ll see more writings from you!
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Aww thank you so much, Niv! 💕 So happy you liked it. Thanks again for your sweet comment. It makes me really happy to hear your thoughts on it 😊
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Beautiful poem… Elegant, moving, curiously innocent yet vastly deep…. Kudos for such a great writing 😊
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Thank you so much. Your words made me feel happy. I’m humbled by your kindness ☺️
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Such a nice poem and again you wrote a piece which is connected to everyone’s heart and you which you always di best! Just awesome Jahnavi!😊😉✌
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Thank you so much for reading! 😊 I appreciate your kind support ✨
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Your always welcome Jahnavi and that’s all you deserve!
And I know that you are a very great blogger yourself👍🤗
Stay happy and stay connected
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Beautiful post🤗
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting ☺️
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Lovely:)
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Thank you so much! ☺️
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Glad you’re back and this is a powerful great reminder Jahn! Great poem!💕
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