
Oceans, drown my thoughts
Feel the wind up in the sky
Aimless hands, they did fought
To wipe the tears of a cry
Closed my eyes, so fast
Darkness echoed in my mind
Voices came at last
But the one I wanted, I can’t find
White walls became my prison
Deaf people, they only listened
Answers turned to questions
Words I ceased to find
Routines glued to the heart
No one knew I was smart
Foolish me, I wanted to walk
Nobody listened, I never talked
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Remarkable poetry Jan. Love the line: “routines glued to the heart”- a treasure.
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Aww, thank you so much! I am honoured to hear that. So happy you thought so.
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My pleasure. You are most welcome. 💖
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Wonderful piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace!!💞
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My pleasure 💕
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Heartfelt and amazing j!💛
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Thank you so much, Riya! So happy you thought so🌙🌠💖
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Goodness, what a remarkable piece!!!
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy you thought so.
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^_^
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Wonderful write, Jahn. Excellent! 👏👏✨✨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I am so happy you thought so✨✨
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Deeply personal and so beautiful.
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate your kind support
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You’re welcome!!
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Profound and beautiful, Jan!🎀❤
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Thank you so much!!💗
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Very beautiful!
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Thank you so much!!
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Wow! Beautiful ❤️❤️👌🌻🌻😭🙌
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Thank you so much!!✨✨
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what a wonderful deep thought provoking poem Jan!
💖
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Thank you so much, Cindy! Truly delighted to hear that 💕
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💕❤️💕
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You’re so welcome!!!
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