Branches of sadness grow stronger around my heartAs the letter of your leaving comes my wayThe river of dreams we bore from the startComes like a tsunami, drowning me, whispering to stay You were the poem in my heart that longed to be writtenThe one that saved me from my darkest daysI think the ones…
I love how you have so beautifully encompassed the entire poem in 4 lines, yet made it so powerful! Great job!
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Thank you so much. I am happy you enjoyed it!☺
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Short and sweet. Love it!!!❤️
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I am so pleased to know that you liked it. Thank you so much..!
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Always a pleasure.💕
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Aw this was a bold write ❤️
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I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much..!😊
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4 lines.. but they meanings can be described in 4 paragraphs, awesome post!
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I am glad you liked it☺. Thanks a lot!!
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Omg, this was so powerful! 🖤😍
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I am pleased to hear that. Thank you so much..!😊
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How are you so good at writing poems! Yours are absolutely beautiful ♥♥
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That’s so kind of you to say. I am pleased to hear that you think so. Thanks a lot!😊
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❤️
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Oh that’s sad. Beautifully written, Jahnavi
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Thank you so much!
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You are welcome ❤🤗😊
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