My thoughts are roaming
My mind a cave
My speech improving
A penny I can’t save
The rain I am listening
My eyes becoming a lane
The night is changing
The moon I came to care
Slowly I am walking
Moving somehow ahead
Days are growing
Tears at night I shed
Many breaths we are taking
Leaving behind our den
Our land is now waiting
Where our destiny will somehow led
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Well written, my friend!
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Thank you so much! I am happy to hear that!!!😊
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My pleasure!
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Wonderful piece. Love it.💕
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I am so glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!❤❤
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You are very welcome.💕
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Lovely!❤
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It really means a lot to me. Thank you so much!!❤
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wow this is great!💖 Do you believe in fate and destiny?
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Thank you so much❤Destiny is mysterious and strange😄
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Wowww..! This is absolutely MARVELLOUS dear Jan..! You are always making a super masterpiece..! Fabulous my dear friend..!❣️❣️❣️✨✨
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I am so happy to hear that Filarance. Thank you so much for your sweet and lovely comment!!!❤❤
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You’re welcome dear Jan..! It’s my pleasure..!❤️❤️
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Another good one!! 😍
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I am happy you think so Nehal. Thank you so much!!❤
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A beautiful piece of poetry! Good one ☝️
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I am glad to know that. Thank you so much!!😊
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Beautiful poem!
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I am happy you think so. Thank you so much!!!
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Well penned + beautiful message, Jan! Your poems are so amazing!
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Thank you so much naomi!!!!😊
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Relatable, well written ☺️
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I am so happy you found it relatable. Thank you so much for your kind and sweet words!!😊
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Beautiful, beautiful. 💙
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you so much!!😊
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You’re most welcome! Always. ☺️
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So sweet poem dear Jahnavi 👌🌷🙏♥️
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Thank you so much for your kind and sweet words. It really means a lot to me!!❤💫
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You are my dear daughter friend and so welcome 🙏 ♥️
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Loved this one. Saved it… Beauti to be reread.
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I am really glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!!😊
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Nice!
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you so much Pannaga!!!😊
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Beautifully penned ❤️
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Thank you so much!!!❤
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A lovely piece of writing!
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I am glad you think so.Thank you so much!!😊
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I do and you are very welcome! 🙂
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Heya i’m for the first time here. I found this board and I find It really useful & it helped me out a lot. I hope to give something back and aid others like you aided me.
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