I watched the night sky
My wings aching to fly
But then I remembered I have no wings
– Jan @jahnavigouri
The reality
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I watched the night sky
My wings aching to fly
But then I remembered I have no wings
– Jan @jahnavigouri
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Oops! A strangely deep piece!
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Thank you so much Sam!!💕
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Ooh, this hit its mark. Lovely piece, Jan!
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Wow! You are so kind. Thanks a lot dear Blue!😊
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I loved this little piece and I know the feeling so well! Very much said in very few words. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much. I am so happy to hear your thoughts. It really means a lot to me. You are most welcome!😊
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Deep meaning emerges out of those thoughts Jahnavi
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I am so happy you think so. Thank you so much!
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Beautiful, and poignant.
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you very much!!💖
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Powerful piece. Love it!💕
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That is so nice to hear. Thank you so much!!!💗
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Very welcome .💕❤️💕
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beautiful picture!!!
and smart composition jan!
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!!😊
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Lovely and deep at the same time🤭💓✨
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I am glad to hear that. Thank you so much!!💕
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You’re more than welcome😊💓✨
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Love this❤️
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!❤
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incredibly Jahanv!💖🙏
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I am so glad. Thank you so much!!💕
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💖🙏🌷welcome so much❣️
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That’s hits. It’s deep and a great piece.
Keep writing!
!Hugs on the wings!
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!😊
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Its a super poem as always! congo on 340+ followers!!!
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So true and lovely lines 👌🌷🙏have a happy Monday 👍🏻😊
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I am so happy to hear that! Thank you so much!😊❤
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You are welcome dear 🌷♥️🙏
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You write so well, beautiful poem
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I am so glad to hear that Stara. Thanks a lot!!!
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Lovely poem!🧡
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Wow! I am so happy to see your comment. Thanks a lot Evin!!!💗
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yep, sorry I’ve not been leaving comments more often :(( I’m catching up though! 😄 you’re welcome.
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No problem Evin! That is totally fine.😊
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Insightful 🌺
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Sad, but beautiful. Short, but captures the feeling so well, really nice images, a nice mixture of hope and despair. 🦢
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I am so glad to hear your thoughts. Thank you so much for stopping by!!!😊
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We can fly in dreams without wings😃Well written 😊thank you 🙏
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That is wise. Thank you so much for your lovely comment!!!❤😊
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🙂😊☺😘🥰😃😇
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I bet you do! ♥️
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