Nostalgia drummed, memories old
Heart intese, a piano song
Radio played a tune unknown
People today, ancient towns
History recited, kings and queens
An old civilization, not to be seen
Today’s and tomorrow’s, falling leaves
Miracles hung above bending trees
I read through verses of joy and pain
They walk me down a historical lane
Many many truths walking unpaid
Old sayings become my guide
Wings wounded fly above the sky
Stories alive inside every mind
Scars surfaced in tales erased by time
They walk on mysteries, no one to find
– Jan @jahnavigouri
Love this!! The picture you chose is wonderful too. “They walk on mysteries, no one to find”๐๐๐
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! I truly appreciate your kind words and encouragement. So glad to hear that you liked itโค๏ธ
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My pleasure. I sure did.๐
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I love the weave Jan and your great picture match my friend!
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So happy you liked them, Cindy! Thank you so much for your kind words and encouragement๐
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Soooo great and youโre soooo welcome! ๐
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Wonderful…and the picture is ๐
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Ooooh. Goodness, this made me feel as if I was falling down the rabbit hole–in the best possible way. Brilliant piece.
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That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much! I am truly happy you liked it๐
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Your work is wonderful. Youโre a talented poet. ^_^
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A lovely poem, Jahn. Splendid. โจโจ
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I am truly happy to hear that๐
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Youโre most welcome, Jahn! Always. โจโจ
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Liked, especially “They walk me down a historical lane”
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Happy you liked it. Thank you so much!๐
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Youโre welcome.
Wish you will visit my posts on safety on road and practice safe driving to make it your habit. Hope you will share my posts with your family members and all your friends๐๐
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Beautifully written yet sad as well!
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That’s a wonderful thought. Thank you so much for reading and commenting๐
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no but AM SERIOUSLY AWED HOW EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR POEMS BASICALLY MAKES ME SOB A BIT BECAUSE THEYโRE SO INCREDIBLY STUNNING ๐ญ also this one?? ITโS ABSOLUTE PERFECTION AND I COULD LITERALLY KEEP READING IT TILL THE END OF ETERNITY OK?? the way you show stories IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND AM JUST IN LOVE WITH ALL OF IT
also this line โMiracles hung above bending treesโ am basically just going to remember it whenever i walk under a tree ALSO AM IN LOVE WITH THIS AND JUST EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR POEMS theyโre THE BEST EVER
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Thank you so much, Anoushka! Your wonderful comment truly bought a smile to my face. I’m so happy you liked it.๐
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Exquisite writing! โค I love the quote from Alice in Wonderland! Have a great week!
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I am so happy you loved it! I love the quote too! โฅ๏ธ Thank you so much โจโจ
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