
Bad things done is never mend
Over time or centuries went
House of greed and anger send
Postcards made from tears and dread
Disappear upon bad little times
And come back when all is fine
I may only be a passer by
Who walk upon with a hidden sigh
Cannot lie or cannot disobey
Your rules made under a secret hide
I am down but I shall fly
Then you can watch with eyes all wide
I may not be the one to blame
When the rain comes, all is same
Whether me or the others in play
Break down all your dreadful game
Forever flowers will never lie
Can’t wither away with dreamy times
Upon the winds and by the hives
They shall stay and never they die
– Jan @jahnavigouri

Lovely lines Jahnavi.
🤗🌹
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Thank you so much! So happy you thought so ✨🌠
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Beautiful piece, dear friend! That last verse is such a perfect ending and ties the whole piece together. Amazingly done as always 🤍🤍
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Thank you so much, Grace! Your kind words truly means a lot to me. Thanks a lot again!! 🤍🌟
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Forever flowers..lovely
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Thank you so much, Athira! So glad you thought so 😊
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Always my pleasure 😊
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very beautiful
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Thank you so much! Really happy to hear that.
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Wonderful piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, Grace! I am so happy you loved it ♥️
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My pleasure. I sure did.💕
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Poignant powerful lines of great beauty. ❤
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Thank you so much! ✨
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Beautiful lines!
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Thank you so much, Vidah!!✨🤍
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Loved the melodic rhythms💗. You always have a way to communicate story and share wisdom with such poetic delicacy and childlike purity!
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Thank you so much, Annabel! Your kind words truly encouraged me. I am so happy you felt so 💕☺️
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Most welcome, dear Jan!💗 Merry Christmas 🎄 and may great fortune be with you!
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Merry Christmas to you too, dear Annabel! 💕May this season be full of light and laughter for you ✨ Wishing you peace, joy and prosperity at Christmas and always 😊
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Your kind wishes are happily received, dear Jan! Hope 2023 be another wonderful blogging adventure for us! Sending hugs!💖
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Beautiful! Flowers will never lie! 👏👏
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Thank you so much!! ☺🌌
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Absolutely beautiful, Jahnavi ❤
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Thank you so much, Saania! ❤ So happy you liked it 🌠
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Amazing post Jaanvi! Too good yr. Your thoughts are really so awesome😊👍👏
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So much beauty in your poem Jahnavi! 💗
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