
It feels nothing special to be a rug by the door
To have people step on you as they come then go
Come water or rain you leave me right outside
I will take your greatest messes all and every time
It is nice to always stay down in the floor
I get to watch the world in all, but gold
I would pretend I am deaf every time you lie
And keep my dark eyes always towards the sky
I always hear your whispers when they’re gone
How you really wished they were away in bones
I now do think I am lucky to be a rug by the door
Than be a human who change at every door
-Jan @jahnavigouri
Lovely
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Thank you so much!!
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Wow what a piece. The rhyming and deep meaning in those last two lines are amazingly written. Change is a gift even if hard to see at times 😊. Well done, my friend 🤍🤍
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! I am so happy you found it so. Your wonderful words make me super happy. I am humbled by your kind words. ♥️😊
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Amazing
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Thank you so much! So happy you liked it.
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What a wonderful perspective and poem Jan!!1 💞
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Thank you so much, Cindy! I am super happy to read your encouraging words. So glad you thought so 💞
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You’re so welcome Always Jahn!!! 💞
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“I now do think I am lucky to be a rug by the door
Than be a human who change at every door.”❤️
You’re a blogger whom I read because I love your writing style.
This is a higher level than follow for follow.
I congratulate you for this.
Stay happy and healthy.
Take care, friend.
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words. Thank you for reading and commenting!! 🌠
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The depth your words hold is worth appreciating, loved it, seriously!💕
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So grateful to hear that you loved it. Thank you so much!! 💕
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Wonderful post Jahnavi! It’s really fabulous. Your thoughts are so amazing 😊👍✌
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Thank you so much! I am super happy you thought so. 😊
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That’s always a pleasure for me😉☺
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Very thoughtful and thought provoking. Very nice.
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Thank you so much!! ☺️
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