
When the fire ablaze dies down
And the water comes rushing to town
There is ashes left, black and brown
Calm and open, waiting for the cloud
It is a no-man’s oath I now preach
Heading to somewhere dark and steep
I would fall down to the hollow deep
Waiting for prisoners, years to keep
I am going back to the devil’s land
Where I won’t find a good kind hand
People are selfish and half dead they stand
Upon the house that lives demand
I am going back to the oblong ground
Where goodness has died, evil surround
I am in a ride in a merry-go-round
I won’t get off as the screams get loud
Ties of horror, many are the crimes
Torn lives in darkness, disappear the time
Black coats and living souls reach the sky
Everything I hear is a scream and a cry
-Jan @jahnavigouri

Wonderful piece, Jan. Truly enjoyed.💕
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So happy to hear you enjoyed, Grace! Thank you so much ❤️
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My pleasure 💕
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Wow! It’s really a great poem. Loved it!💕
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Thank you so much. Your kind words made me smile. Thanks once again! I appreciate your kind support ♥️
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My pleasure 💕
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Beautiful piece and photo. Both fit so well. My heart sang with this song. So beautiful ❤️🥰
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I liked the picture too. Thank you so much. I am so happy you liked it!! ♥️☺️
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You’re welcome, Jahn!! 🙂 Have a great day !!!
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A gorgeous piece, Jahn. Amazing! ✨✨
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Thank you so much, Jeff! I am so happy to hear you liked it.😁
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You’re welcome, Jahn! Always. 😁
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I am going back to the oblong ground
Where goodness has died, evil surround
That sounds a lot like planet earth!
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This was actually a poem I wrote about a place were goodness has died and unkindness sits at the front row. And it’s true that as time passes unkindness is spreading on Planet Earth more and more. Thank you so much for reading!
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Excellent rhyming, my friend! What a beautiful piece…you always deliver masterpieces 🤍🤍
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Your comment made me smile, Grace! So happy you felt that way. Thank you so much!! ♥️😊
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A delicious brew of beauty and dark. A spectacular poem!
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Thank you so much for reading! So happy you thought so.
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You’re most welcome!
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Beautiful blog
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Aw, I’m happy you think so. Thank you so much! My blog design was recently updated but it came out prettier than I thought. Thanks again!! 😊
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It’s my pleasure🥰
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Wonderful post yrr! Your posts are really so good and informative too!
Great👍😊👏
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Thank you so much! So happy you found it informative and good. ✨😄
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That’s always a pleasure for me!
And you deserve it all because your work is really so great👍😊👏
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I love this!
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It’s a beautiful poem! I would call it a dark beauty.
I mean, this is more relatable to the night, the moon and the moonlight and not the sun specifically.
Figuratively this poem defines current situation of our society.
I consider each of your poem a masterpiece.
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It’s amazing…..
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Thank you 😊
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