
My life is moving
Like the wind on the shore
My days are growing
Growing with more hope
The night is laughing
Like the sea and the stars
The sunrise is waiting
Painting forgotten lands
The bridge of life drawing
A future no small
With chances I am walking
To lands that lie afar
My tomorrow is waiting
The present moving fast
For months I am hoping
For something to fall from the stars
-Jan @jahnavigouri

So meaningful! I love it!
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I am so happy. Thank you so much!!💕
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Lovely😍🥰
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Thank you so much!!❤
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You’re more than welcome🥰💙
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Very whimsical . Truly enjoyed.💕
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I am so happy you enjoyed. Thank you so much!!❤
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My pleasure.💕
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“The night is laughing” — great line.
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Thank you so much!!!
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Aww. Lovely.
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!😊
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Beautiful and hopeful. ❤
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!💕
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♥️♥️
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Life needs a lot of patience☠😪
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Yes, that is true. Thank you so much for reading!!
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Aww thats written so beautifully!
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment Stara!!💕
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so SO beautifully penned!! 😍🥺❤
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Thank you so so much Diya!!❤
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Masterpiece! One of the best posts of yours. Love it! 👌
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I am so happy you loved it. Thank you very much Sam!!😊
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Aah, lovely post!
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!❤
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Beautifully written 🌼✨
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I am so happy to see your comment. Thank you so much!!💫
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❤️
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“Painting forgotten land ” Is just my favorite line! 🦋🖤
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!💗
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Wowww..! I love the whole poem dear Jan..! This is a masterpiece..! Each and every stanzas are fabulous..!
Especially I loved this stanza very much..!
“My tomorrow is waiting
The present moving fast
For months I am hoping
For something to fall from the stars”
Keep on shinning my dear..! Very beautiful..!✨✨😊💖💕
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Wow! That is such a sweet comment Filarance. Thank you so much for reading!!!❤❤
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Awww..! You’re very welcome my sweet Jan..!🦋💖💖
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So lovely 🌷👌🙏😊
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!💛😊
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You are welcome dear 🌷🙏♥️
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Very inspiration.
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!😊
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♥️ Love your poetry and your images, too. ♥️
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I am so happy you loved them. Thank you so much!!❤
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a beautiful magical poem Jahnav!!!💖👏
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you so much!!💕
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oh awesome and have a great day.. so welcome!💖
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Lovely!
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I am happy to hear that. Thank you!!!
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I loved this!!!!!
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Thank you so much!!!!
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Loved it 😍
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Thank you so much!!!😊
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