
A penguin lost in a desert
A piece of ice I want to breath
Even if the ice isn’t real
It would be heaven to me
The scorching sun on my back
What would happen to me?
Should I die like the others
Or would I live and live
My home now seem like a distant
Distant star from my reach
Everyone in the desert is happy
Happy as it is their home, you see
I once had a past so happy
Between the Antarctican sun and breeze
I had friends and family to hold me
When life wasn’t happy and free
Now alone at a distance
Distance they would never come to see
I stand with my face to the sun
Courage I would never leave
I would walk and walk ahead
Regret won’t breathe in me
A unhappy tear I can’t shed
I would fight till my last breath
-Jan @jahnavigouri

Powerfull…
Miss G 😊
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind support😊
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Lovely! Beautifully written
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I’m truly happy to hear that. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
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You have a distinctive poetic style that is heart-capturing and gentle at the same time!🌷🥳🌻
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Your appreciation truly warmed my heart and placed a smile on my face, dear Annabel! Thank you so much for your encouraging words🌌😊
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You are most deserving, Jan! 🌷💗
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Amazing and powerful piece, Jan. Love it.💕
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Thank you so much, dear Grace! 💕
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My pleasure 💕
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I just love the way the word flow is as sharp and beautiful as the featured artwork!
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That’s truly awesome to hear! Thank you so much for your encouraging words🌌 I’m happy you liked it.
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Breathtaking.
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That’s so nice to hear. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I appreciate your kind support!😊
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You’re most welcome. Thank you for sharing your awesome work, and all your support as well. ^_^
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This is a great piece that makes me think of the way we mindlessly accept climate change. Love this. Have a blessed weekend. Hugs, Joni
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I’m glad you loved it. Thanks!! I really appreciate your support.
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The words pierce the heart and yet there is inspiration! Bravo, Jan! 3
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I am so happy to hear that! Your kind support is really appreciated. Many thanks, Harshi!❤
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This is a beautiful and poignant write, Jan!
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Thank you so much, D!
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Of course!
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That’s so lovely, Jahn. Each word dripping with resilience and courage. ✨✨
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That’s so awesome to hear! Thank you so much, Jeff!
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Nice
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Thank you so much!
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This is quite sentimental.
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Nice work 💖
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Thank you so much!❤️
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I would walk and walk ahead
Regret won’t breathe in me
Alright, I found some courage!
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I truly appreciate your kind support.
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Nice
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Thank you so much!!
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Beautiful as always.
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Thank you so much!
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